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Read Poems by bawa talwar

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just leave

Sun rode through the window this morning
I got up with a hope of better days to come
leave behind the emotional chaos
centered around me
I will not remember him
who lost all considerations and decided to leave
he was a chameleon 
who was lead by selfish bliss
go away take all with you 
leave nothing behind
go with your selfishness
faux considerations and imbroglio
for you are blind
sun rid me off this energy
that triggers recurring memory
let me in peace ,heal my broken heart
go I'm done
let me be blessed by the sun

Copyright © bawa talwar | Year Posted 2017


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  1. Date: 6/28/2017 9:56:00 AM

    Very dynamically expressed sentiments that touch the heart of the reader. It so vivid and flows like a river flooded by emotions dear, Bawa! By using the expression "I will not remember him" I can safely conclude you are a lady! Wonderful! Welcome again, your presence will beautify further our beautiful poetic family!
  1. Date: 6/28/2017 7:46:00 AM

    Liked the poem ... expression of agony ... portrayal of the pains from wounds ... May the sun rays warm you up ...
  1. Date: 6/28/2017 6:21:00 AM

    Thank you for taking the trouble ! I highly appreciate it.kindly read other works also
  1. Date: 6/28/2017 12:19:00 AM

    Heart felt. The pain is real, the hurt and heartache hurts. I hope that your pain will be blessed with love and happiness. May your day be filled with great sunshine and all the love you can get. Best wishes friend.