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Read Poems by bawa talwar

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none bothers

I sulk I cry none bothers they care a fig
although I slog in the house as if a pig
untiringly serve them day n night
they ignore all that outright
if I demand attention take recourse to crying
they feel some tactics IM applying
I want them to sit n laugh n smile
and just want them to sit with me for a while
none has the intention or time
they feel they have other things prime
will have to live like this lonely
learn to live on my own solely
cant they see  I too work hard 
all my pleasures are thus marred
I have no friends as families priorities I  chose
except for some attention
I've no material intention
how long can I thus  function 
I feel lost n companionless at this junction
to unwind I've tried meditation
it gives me little or no peace Ill say without hesitation
what do I wither shall I go
I want some time they must know
I love my grandchildren to the utmost 
but to their parents wrath I'm the host
shall I fall back on my long lost friends
who could help me at these lonely bends
I must seek my friends company  now
I  should sever strong ties with family somehow
at this tension giving time friends will be best
this will bring them to test
for if they can pull me out of this mire
Ill certainly love them n admire
right now I'm restless n companionless
unless friends come up as I'm  helpless 

Copyright © bawa talwar | Year Posted 2017


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  1. Date: 8/19/2017 8:51:00 PM

    I really felt the 'pain' in this piece . I sense a sort of detachment from loved ones that you don't wish to have.