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love in the void

As you grow older one comes across
Different battles  different hardships
Dealing with the Satan and the sins
We got to learn to handle it
Frustrating and killing it is
We got to learn to handle it
The guilt is there to remind
No solace we find
There was a guilt of being
 in the family but not wholly belonging
Call of ambitions was strong
I chased my dreams he his
Love was neither given nor received
As we lived under one roof
In separate ways
Realizing the futility of all
I gave in
As the nucleus
In the atom is a must ,and must be stable
I started giving attention to him
Took care to cook his choice
Kept the house clean and
Remained cheerful and loving
Slowly  the bond
Grew stronger and love 
Has made an entry, it has entered
The void we had created.

Copyright © bawa talwar | Year Posted 2017


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  1. Date: 4/27/2017 7:19:00 PM

    I echo the sentiment of Demetrios below. Welcome to Poetry Soup! This is an intriguing write full of depth and rich with its use of language. It almost feels like a misclassified lyric, particularly at the start. If you haven't alteady, check out a poet here named John Hamilton. He's a wonderful poet/lyricist and a great guide for such writes. Either way, this is lovely and profound. Look forward to reading more from you
  1. Date: 4/26/2017 2:33:00 PM

    Profound and thought provoking my friend, Bawa! Welcome to our poetic family! I liked your poem and its intensity! Love is the universal form that unites everything! Good is to sacrifice our egos on the altar of love if we wish a relationship to grow and remain strong!