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I Got 101 Hacks

I got
101 hacks 
why I shouldn't   
take you back 

Hook: just give me a moment 
and I'll tell you why
(she just slams the door 
in his face, and keeps on singing)
because I like long nights 
when the phone doesn't ring
and my boyfriends girl doesn't
hang-up on me 
(stops singing and say 'hello hello'
on the phone)
you can tell her 
my number still the same 
just in case she needs, anything
like where's your new address  
(said with sarcasm)     

Hook: just give me a moment 
and I'll tell you why
(she standing at the ice box)

because I'll like my dinners nice and hot
not straight from a box 
unless your saving money
for a brand new rock 
(looking at a big diamond on her finger)     

 so take your old boots 
and park-em elsewhere 
you know somewhere like hell

I got
101 hacks 
why I shouldn't   
take you back 

I've got to wash my hair 
I've got to shine my shoes 

I've got lots of things 
I can do
(she standing with a cowboy with a smile on his face)
(over his head his name is big charlie)

Hook: So! just give me a moment 
and I'll tell you why

I got a date tonight 
guess what 
its not you 
(she's just sitting on the couch in her robe and eating ice cream and other junk food)

I got
101 hacks 
why I shouldn't   
take you back 

aka: lyricvixen

Copyright © verlecia fields | Year Posted 2017


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  1. Date: 9/20/2017 5:00:00 AM

    Sounds like a rap... nice one
  1. Date: 8/14/2017 3:30:00 PM

    this is really COOL. Let's see a youtube video of it now!!!
  1. Date: 8/7/2017 12:15:00 PM

    I had to come again to your poem since you do not have a new one. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I wonder if i could write a dark poem on the lines you suggested? Only time will tell.
  1. Date: 8/5/2017 10:22:00 AM

    Very cool! I can almost hear it!! rPAT
  1. Date: 7/29/2017 4:02:00 PM

    Oh how I wish you could record this. Might be a hit, who knows
  1. Date: 7/29/2017 9:15:00 AM

    LMAO This had me laughing. I can't stop laughing. LOL
  1. Date: 7/29/2017 9:09:00 AM

    Like it! Made me smile ~ j