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Depression

Every morning lately it has been like this
waking up with a wet towel for a brain
feeling like I'm filled with dry beans 
no one could shake me hard enough
to wake up for this strange half coma
I don't know how long it will last
sometimes it goes away pretty quick
sometimes not
I can't stop thinking
I can't become free
of the attachment
of me. 



Copyright © grits biscuits | Year Posted 2012

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  1. Date: 3/28/2016 10:37:00 PM

    grits biscuits, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
  1. Date: 8/11/2015 5:37:00 PM

    GRITS, this is a good read, thanks for sharing..... **SKAT**

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