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Without Me

Everything falls to pieces,
as the reality of my worthless existence
dawns on me.
So I crawl;
to that empty space
I call my mind.
To hide from the world
that wishes to
prick,
prattle,
and probe
until there is nothing left.
Except for me,
and my insecurities.
A endless assemblage
of dreams and regrets,
that have led me
to believe - 
THERE IS nothing left.
So as the last tear flows
I only hope,
tomorrow will be
a little less bleak,
Without Me.

Copyright © Eli Pickle | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/26/2012 4:03:00 PM

Wow! Dark.
Date: 1/25/2012 10:21:00 AM

I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it E. Love, Carol
Date: 1/24/2012 7:52:00 PM

Wow that's pretty deep. I can feel the loneliness of self pity and worthlessness, been there before. Excellent description of depression. Muzz

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