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Without Me

Everything falls to pieces, as the reality of my worthless existence dawns on me. So I crawl; to that empty space I call my mind. To hide from the world that wishes to prick, prattle, and probe until there is nothing left. Except for me, and my insecurities. A endless assemblage of dreams and regrets, that have led me to believe - THERE IS nothing left. So as the last tear flows I only hope, tomorrow will be a little less bleak, Without Me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2012 4:03:00 PM
Wow! Dark.
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:21:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it E. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2012 7:52:00 PM
Wow that's pretty deep. I can feel the loneliness of self pity and worthlessness, been there before. Excellent description of depression. Muzz
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 1/24/2012 8:12:00 PM
Check you soup mail>> Muzz

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