Untangible Poems | Examples


Painful Past, New Beginings

Flashback memoirs of when i longed for ur attention
Untangible thoughts of u placed me in subdued submission
Undeniable adversion came along with this decision
To leave you behind instead of continuious remissions
Of retracing footsteps back to you
Everytime you did something you knew made me yearn for you
The presence you gave me came across like a photograph
Capturing glimpes of ur love yes they last
But Only in the form of a painful memory
Remembered we used to be encased in the same senerary
Once we drew the same line, walked the same path
Until you became the better half of me 
Now it seems loneliness has become my company
Never did I imagine I would hear a lovers cry
Never did I think it would be coming from my eyes
But as time goes on i began to realize 
Now with you gone I have a new sunrise
And it sets with knowing with the in and outs and conjures of my soul
That my trues love resides inside of me and never grows old
Categories: untangible, lost love, me, love,
Form: Blank verse

Sshhhh Just For a Minute, Please

Are you happy in your ignorance?
A slave to stereotype.
You claim you're not a Romeo,
but I don't believe the hype.
No matter how my words fall out ,
in English or in 'blah blah'
I can't get you to understand,
frustration is a cancer
I wish I could just stop the clock,
grab your head in my hands
and beg and plead for you to speak
and tell me where I stand.
Alone? or just a step behind you,
a thousand miles away?
Can I be with you when I wake up
every b-----d day?
My eyes will come to focus 
on untangible junctures
and when I try to say my piece,
my mouth can't form the words.
Because you know and now I know
that I crush all that I hold.
You're a precious tiny butterfly
who's wings are shroud in gold.
I'll leave this be, but please, be free
and i'll refrain from crumbling,
restrain myself from thinking
that this nothing could be something


15th September 2011
Categories: untangible, hope, love,
Form: Rhyme


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