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Premium MemberMy Gratitude Undying

At eleven years old, by my Dad I was told
  that I'd soon be enrolled, in a special Hebrew program

Try it for a year, my son, my dear
  Do not fear: It'll be over before you know it

Hebrew you'll learn; for Torah you'll yearn
  To God you will turn. You'll thank me for this in the long run

Well, my Dad was plain wrong. That year felt so long
  It dragged and dragged along.  Then, voila! It just ended

My Bar Mitzvah was good. I did my job like I should
  Ate as much food as I could.  And told my father I was quitting

My Dad was so sad. He felt I'd gone bad
  Didn't care I was glad.  Told me I'd made a mistake...

Years and years passed. My resolve didn't last
  Just as my Dad had forecast.  He'd been right all along

To God I had turned.  For Torah I yearned 
  Hebrew I burned to relearn.  But now I was sad

For Dad had passed away. His kindness unrepaid
  At his gravesite I pray ~ that he accept my gratitude undying



                        September 01, 2020
                Attitude of Gratitude Poetry Contest
                      Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Categories: unrepaid, appreciation, father son, inspirational,
Form: Rhyme

Change

Change, and known becomes unknown
Hidden things uncovered 
Angst on verge frozen
Negotiating new domains
Gaps of vulnerability
Emancipated to attain

Stagnant things die however
Protean things are suspect 
I am sometimes ambivalent
Keeper of traditions vain
Erratic rivers are not ambiguous
Spent only at the delta's rich goal

Fear troubles still the comfort zones of ease
Expectations are those visited before
Averting not the vicarious door
Resistance falters only on the familiar lees
                  ii
I could have taken you there like child
The hand of the familiar is all we have to trust
If only I had concieved
How much strangers we had become
And what we had lost in shallow years
I would have given you voice again
Tender like a mother, firm like a father
Encouraging like a friend
I was so weary of lending feathers unrepaid
I was drunk on presumption
You would fly alone among the flaks and clouds
And come with rain at end of flight
To see me reaping before the night
A nest of straw and grain
I planted my tree of faith in vain, the limbs groan too with pain.
Categories: unrepaid, loss,
Form: Free verse


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