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Premium MemberRearranged

The background is loud and crowded with plots;
blended conversations, a threat to my thoughts.

Clusters of shapes invade my blank space,
shifting without an object to chase.

You float like a figure, just passing through,
with the lighting too sheen to hold on to you.

When the background is different, you have changed
like an undone puzzle, rearranged.

Do you remember me, who sat at your table?
One leg was wobbly, grape juice unstable.

The roll edges were crisp but hollowish inside
like an unreceived hug, uneven beside.

You spoke about me, but never to me
as if autistics weren't part of humanity.

My mouth was mute, but yet my mind spoke.
I pondered your uneven sleeves like an obscure joke.

Is this still you, in a blue tee, without your mom?
My hands are waxy like Grandma's lip balm.

Speaking is arduous; how does one say, "Hi?"
What if it's not you in the background of my eye?

10-16-2024
Categories: unreceived, confusion, humanity, mental health,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMiracle After Miracle After Miracle

Early one morn the sun did sink
   in the west as the moon arose
And Farmer Jones inspected his rose
   of purple corn, which began to dance
Shedding sheaves, donning pants...

While in the barn, the cow was neighing
   at Ed the horse, professorially saying
That Oscar the penguin had quacked his last quack
   unless the Porcupine's magic needles bring him back...

Back in the house, Mrs. Jones was a-me-owing
   at her pet bird Elvis, who was busy massaging  
The tummy of the chipmunk, Rufus, a big of a doofus
   while her rattlesnake, "Nixon," was clearly a-fixin'
To tickle Farmer Smith's duckbill platypus
   though that really shouldn't matter to us... 

A miracle happens every single minute --- 
   the sun comes up, the moon goes down,
The world turns round --- But they remain unreceived 
   ~ unless there's something unusual in them perceived
Categories: unreceived, miracle, nature, universe,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberUnreceived Parcel

Unreceived  Parcel

I have sent your parcel Please be patient  
Your curtain hooks have been sent 
It's on its way
Yes sir, I have sent it 
I will make a special deliver 
Through the dark forces of night 
In horse and cart 
Await me at 2 am tonight 
Leave the window slightly ajar 
I will ring three chimes on my arrival 
With your special delivery 
Slide open the window 
Look down You will see me standing there with your parcel 
Slowly on your toes  
Push forward and slide out the window 
Reach for me 
Then you will have your parcel  
I will have delivered the goods 
Your wife will have curtain hooks to hang the curtains  
Then your curtains will be closed forever 
I will place roses on your grave 
Sending you a graceful goodbye 
Delivering, your unreceived goods
Categories: unreceived, evil, funeral, gothic, grave,
Form: Limerick

Unreceived Promises

You've cost me more than money,
You've cost me dignity and pride.
The wish that I had not let go,
Of all I held inside.

All the pain that comes with love,
And all the hate that follows.
All the time I can only hope,
That yesterday is tomorrow.

So I can stop, and save my life,
From the treachery you bequeathed.
From all the broken promises,
And heartache I received.

For all the time that time stood still,
For all the time it didn't.
For wearing my heart upon my sleeve,
When I should have kept it hidden.

For tears crawl pedantically,
Down my mourning face.
But thoughts still fly round frantically,
Bringing with them bitter taste.

For it may be dead inside you,
But inside me burns a flame.
The winds of time will not blow out,
And anger will not tame.
Categories: unreceived, angst, music, sad, me,
Form: Rhyme
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