Uncock Poems | Examples


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Words,
a mouthful of sonic projectiles, 
little payloads of hurt,
rage-tipped,
enough pain
to stop any assailant,
ready to explode into the 
few feet of air between 
you and the target,
punch through,
expand.

No entry wound,
no exit wound,
all internal trauma, 
capping verbal crossfire
in a little 
domestic drama.

Split-second decision. 

Do you pull the trigger, 
claim victory,
and concede a kind of defeat?
Or do you uncock the hammer,
knowing there'll be 
casualties,
one at 
each 
end?
Categories: uncock, abuse, anger, feelings, hurt,
Form: Free verse

Swimming - a Non Bilateral Technical Mantra

stroke, roll,
stroke, roll,
breath

climbing along the water's surface,
body turning on a skewer,
breathing bubbles,
exhaling fully,
metronomic to a viewer

stroke, roll,
stroke, roll,
breath

fingertips, wrist and elbow angled
each below the other in turn
break the surface
then pushing forward
spinning the torso in return

stroke, roll,
stroke, roll,
breath

catch before the full arm extension
pulling along the "railway track"
feel the water
hard on the forearm
and spinning the body right back

stroke, roll,
stroke, roll,
breath

continue the stroke under the 'pit
pulling the elbow high and clear
uncock the wrist
pull with the triceps
whilst pushing the hand to the rear

stroke, roll,
stroke, roll,
breath

lips breaking the top of the water
eye spying the rope of the lane  
one sharp breath in
the wrist leads the way
to start it it all over again

stroke, roll,
stroke, roll,
breath
Categories: uncock, sports,
Form: Free verse


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