Totara Poems | Examples


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Unfolding

deep within the dimly lit bush  
totara trees, tall and straight 
envelop the tangled undergrowth 
            roots and leaf mold 
                    cool damp earth
 
ahead 
caught in a patch of sunlight 
the bright green fern frond 
unfolding 



8 November 2022 
'Unburden a U word' poetry contest 
Sponsor Constance La France

November

at last! 
the first hot days are here 
   blue skies and warm breezes 
       vivid green lush grass 

birds are noisily nesting 
  skinks zip over the rocks 
    shiny summer coats appear on the cows 
     sooky calves race about with round tums 
   
down in the bush
   fresh leaves brighten the totara trees 
        a tea tree flowers profusely 
            smothered with bees 

up in the garden 
    veggies put on a happy spurt
        poppy petals ripple 
           beans wind upward 

after a cold winter and changeable spring 
    we all relax
       awakening again in the warmth

abundance 
optimism 
   
early summer in November 


4 November 2022 
November Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Regina McIntosh

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