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Premium Member The chains that bind me

the years of clutter sum total
feel much like a noose around my neck
the memories both good and bad
exhausting in their tonnage

trinkets on shelves
reminders in drawers
paramount to the anchor
out to hold me back

the sea beckons all around me
but i’m fettered in a stalemate
hovering when i should be sailing

how i envy the minimalist
who has mastered the art
of letting go ~



AP: 1st place 2025, 2nd place 2025

altruist

The world doesn’t tend to give you what you want 
Give me a locked box, the indescribable taunt 
What if she was feeling generous? 
In a moment of empathy, some severance 

My fingers delve deep and rummage 
I’d pay your entry fee, some sort of tonnage 
Reaching past the gold, the silver 
Some objects the victims to pilfer 

I can feel it beating at the bottom, submerged by guilt 
Picking up the shattered pieces, always knew you needed rebuilt 
I'll spend all night putting you back together 
Please let me talk to you, I can feel our tether 

Your heart was broken in the bottom of my box 
Why you left it with me is a total flummox 
I chose to return your heart back to you, as you repaired mine 
Maybe this time my act of kindness will cause us to intertwine 

The world doesn’t tend to give you what you want 
But if you give me a chance, maybe I can

Lonely As a Cloud In April

LONELY AS A CLOUD IN  APRIL


I knew Great Aunt Lucy’s April outing to celebrate
My failed exams  would be  a  series of disasters, 
A slow motion flying April-fool joke, with  my problems as  ballast.
We went to her favorite restaurant :
The waiter offered me an education  of pastries,
While  glowing over Wordworth’s  golden host,
Followed by the predictable surprise of  her favorite theatre.
We sat through a prison sentence of opera music;
Then a driver-tour of the  city’s scant attractions 
Was tonnage of boredom reduced in a finger-snap 
By his changed tone  - about his childhood home ground. 
My life-sentence was commuted  -
In a blink I saw everything differently.  
I  felt  an orgy of interest in my head
In the way a reflection in  a puddle can appear 
In an instant to be a piece of sky-jigsaw 
Which has fallen to the ground. After that  
You can never again see it in the usual way.
I gazed and gazed but little thought, so I fell asleep.

11  April  2021

(Note…with apologies to better poets  like  W Wordsworth and D  Thomas)
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
Entered in the April Poetry Contest  (2021)  of  Regina  McIntosh


Indigenous Feel of Peaceful Love

Indigenous feel of peaceful love Interferencing touch of skin 
 There has been no where better I have been 
So empowered , clean , free 
  Often like Im at ease , drinking a tea , 

With stream , 
 Although a dream It may seem 

Weightlessly I can consumate 
a lot more tonnage 
At lifes pondurousness , 

Positive evoke , Energy we soak ,
 Life comes on a stroke , but we stroke ...
 So much left to unlock . 

Potential in the abnormality , we catch stars with dignity , 
  As one comes as one goes
  Fly Away.. the crows 
  Come over , our doves 
  Closer together , the line draws 
  the hole hollows 
 
 Heart follows 
   Sweet marshmellows 
   and melons 
   
We're here in the comfort 
     in the fort of love

Rozalia P. XS

Numb8rs

Numbers make the world, 
no smiles or batted eyes here
numbers make the world, 
no sticky-sweet fingers or waving palms
numbers rule without qualms

Gross domestic products and 
tonnage of staples on actuarial tables
PSI and APY ratioed percentages
leveraged capitals 
daily numbers of sales calls - 
numbers are to do 'n' all

Numbers make the world, 
no full moon in lapis sky
no fresh-picked basil on peckish plate
no dreaming lovers to salivate
only numbers of bushels per acre
no smokey-sweet of roasted ears

It's numbers that count
no blessings of sermon on the mount
for the numbers shall inherit
by long or short division,
able to sway, today's decision

about what's important, what life is for 
it's all about a number, nothing more,
so don't worry 'bout what's next in store
'cause you can't count on it anymore
- it's days are numbered 

like counting sheep, now close your
eyes, 'n' get some REM sleep
dreaming now of days, away ago,
when it wasn't so - 
that numbers made the world

© Goode Guy 2013-04-01

Premium Member Sholing By the Sea

Down on Englands southern coast, i have a friend (you know)
he's living his life with wedded wife, as the tonnage comes & goes

He has a Dad as people do.. who lives not far away 
and when i eat a banana, i recall a thing he'll say

Not that my nose (or anyones) is larger than his own! 
its just a line of kid (thats all,) from a kid at heart, who's fully grown..

I hold them both in great regard, these friends of many years
(i know i've laughed with both of them) till my eyes were filled by tears"

And times as i'll think on Maurice and his Dad, wherever i happen to be..) 
i know that they'll smile when they speak my name, at Sholing by the Sea.


Final Option

Suicide is always an option.
You're depressed, they tell me.
Be patient. You'll feel better tomorrow.
For more than thirty years I've been waiting,
And tomorrow never comes. Every morning it's today.
Sometimes I know I should have called a halt,
With a noose or pill or razor; perhaps a bullet-
An infinite choice of methods, leading to..
The never yet exercised final option.
So each dawn I add the weight of another day,
To the tonnage I already carry.
Sometimes I think, Perhaps a shrink?
But no, insanity is only a state of mind,
And suicide is always an option.

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