Revaluation Poems


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30 August 2021
Categories: revaluation, satire,
Form: Haiku

Have Somthing To Say.

Have Somthing To Say.
by Cate Rock

Have something to say.
I wanna scream it out loud...
I wanna yell to the city 
and want to scream it cause I'm proud.

I had a dream to day!
I've had a thought.
Ive had my revaluation 
and its not what i sought.

I've dreamed this dream for days long past.
But this thought in my head ... 
It just lasts...

I wanna breathe again.
Take that long awaited breath
I WANT HOPE AGAIN.
To lay my worries to rest.

I want to thrive again
thrive on love. 
i want hope again i want yours.
Open your heart and ill open doors.

Open hope to me and ill sail any sea.
Open that heart and believe in me...

I'll be perfect...as i always thrive to be.
I'll stay yours and be what ever you want me to be.

Let me be yours,
I'll let you be mine.
Let me have hope again,
Help me learn to shine.

give me hope...
I'll take your pain.
I'll love you without question 
and have the world to gain.





Submission date : 2009-07-06
Categories: revaluation, loveme, heart, dream, dream,
Form: Rhyme


The Wall

So many years living within, the "shelter" a self imposed safe place.
My dreams, my aspirations, on the outside just beyond my grasp.
Trying so hard to honor expectations. Living while internally dying...

                                     I built a wall

I couldn't understand my unhappiness, on the outside I wore a smile.
Discontent became the shadow that covered each step I made.
I didn't recognize this person, revaluation came with understanding...

                                 A crack in the wall

The change came slowly because I just didn't realize that,
everything I thought I needed, was killing me inside.
A meltdown left me shaken. I prayed to God for inner strength...

                          The wall began to crumble

The pride that had sustained me, I had to throw out the door.
The years of doubt and indecision have been replaced by free will.
A door has been opened and on the other side I find, myself...

                            The wall is coming down
Categories: revaluation, recovery from...me,
Form: Free verse
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