Remedying Poems | Examples


Who cares

Your tepid favour not really warming to the thought.
There's no alchemy with which to distil a retort.
Comfort is a stretch, lack the agility to contort.
Best I seem to manage is a tireless distraught.

I'm lonely, saves me being an affliction.
My discomfort puts others in an awkward position.
How timely, seemed an effortless decision.
Left me having trouble remedying this condition.

This bitter flavour, sick having to savour such rancid after-taste.
Try to draw conclusions from the mess I have retraced.
Pointless seeking why it's this position I've been placed.
Now all I'll be to you a gap in memory, erased.
Categories: remedying, depression, lonely, sad,
Form: Rhyme

Featherless Angels

Time twirls slowly,
when tragedy sunders 
antiquated wings—
maimed and eroded, becoming 
featherless angels, 
ferociously combatant, 
sparring to win, 
wandering in vacant division,
while penetrating the walls 
of our wildering downfalls. 
Finding clemency in the 
glimmer of our healing ambience, 
realigning the quills of our love,
with every breath and pace across
idyllic esplanades, soaring above 
catacombs of lawless perdition, 
remedying grievances, while
reveling in the haven of 
rhapsodic euphoria amidst 
lingering plumes, 
diffusing eternal tales of our 
blissful hereafter.
Categories: remedying, change, dedication, devotion, emotions,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberSovereign Brain

Blessed be GOD,
           the ultimate sovereign* Brain
     best in His omniscience to work in every single neuron...
Ruling by His righteousness 
          He readily reveals
     restoring cerebellum functions, remedying cerebral injuries...
Affirming His omnipotence 
          as well as His love's compassion
     assuring my faith that all is well under His marvelous control...
Influencing thru, inspiring by, 
          instilling His goodness-grace
     imparting His divine nature to those who trust Him as Saviour...
Nurturing and nourishing mankind 
          with His provisions' bounty
     never neglecting my brain-afflicted Dad in the intensive care unit.
 
*Psalm 103:19 The LORD hath prepared his throne in the heavens; and his kingdom ruleth over all.

December 29, 2018
Acrostic with alliteration
Categories: remedying, appreciation, christian, faith, god,
Form: Acrostic

Riddance, Refurbishment

Bringing undesirable to book, 
on irregularities for the look, 
exposing acts of crook and hook. 

plugging out loopholes, 
erecting pillars and poles, 
making a determined score. 

Remedying, 
nursing bruised soles, 
overhaul to the core 

©Luckson Mupakamiso 2017
Categories: remedying, adventure, art,
Form: Epigram
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