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Paralegically tripped you up
Did you brush your teeth
Your look weird your eyes are far too close to your mouth
now im 70 i dont think i love you
but i should have realised when i was 23

 knows how we got together its a mystery
touch of your hand makes me jittery
One day i will fall
hoping ever day love
Demented every day tell you who I am
So lonely now
Shake my head  heart still beating
Can't  think you are so loud
Could have found love but well  here we are
You baldy Gonk  and your stupid face
Nocrowds here  give me back my name
You stunk on the piano the same way as your mum
How could  i love you the same
'Lost  money your house sold never old you've always been
God your smile's  goes on forever sickening mind hopefully a memory
I'm thinking about normal love not your easy lays
Once had a murder plan
Couldn't find knives but the steaks
Rolling knife in hand
be out by now

So lonely now
Take your loathing arms from me
Glasgow kissed me seen a thousand stars
Shake my head  heart still beating
Can't  think you are so loud
Dare i can't hear a beating heart
You were so loud
Could have found love but well  here we are
love can finally start

Copyright © Christopher Quigley

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