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I Rewrote Thinking Out Loud

Paralegically tripped you up Did you brush your teeth Your look weird your eyes are far too close to your mouth now im 70 i dont think i love you but i should have realised when i was 23 knows how we got together its a mystery touch of your hand makes me jittery One day i will fall hoping ever day love Demented every day tell you who I am So lonely now Shake my head heart still beating Can't think you are so loud Could have found love but well here we are You baldy Gonk and your stupid face Nocrowds here give me back my name You stunk on the piano the same way as your mum How could i love you the same 'Lost money your house sold never old you've always been God your smile's goes on forever sickening mind hopefully a memory I'm thinking about normal love not your easy lays Once had a murder plan Couldn't find knives but the steaks Rolling knife in hand be out by now So lonely now Take your loathing arms from me Glasgow kissed me seen a thousand stars Shake my head heart still beating Can't think you are so loud Dare i can't hear a beating heart You were so loud Could have found love but well here we are love can finally start

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