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The humbling of a false saviour

If there is a god and he does exist 
No matter what he has to say it wouldn't mean a thing 
An apology is long overdue
But now it's far too late
You abandoned black people
And for that I feel for you nothing but hate

It begs the question of your intentions 
With the world with your actions - or lack thereof 
What was the point of us being your creation 
When your only plan for us was punishment 
When we have done nothing wrong 
So please enlighten on why you chose the oppressors 

It was a choice between peace and war
There is only one correct answer 
Yet you chose the wrong one
But don't worry your cult is still the biggest one 
With all your brainless members 
In the eyes of the world you can do no wrong -
You are their 'all loving, all perfect god'
But let's not kid ourselves you're not
In reality you are a vindictive monster
And that would be valid if not for my atheism 

I would rather spend eternity in hell with lucifer 
Then in heaven with you - a fraudster
Because at least Satan doesn't pretend to be something he's not
He would probably treat my people much fairer

If no one else will hold you accountable 
I will volunteer 
I will never worship something so evil
Damnation would be better 
Than respecting you, a self proclaimed saviour
When in fact you are more like a deadbeat father 
Who coincidentally choosing your lighter ones
I know your game, you won't be let off
Because whether your real or not 
My belief you will never have 
You may be invisible, but your silence is not 
It is loud not quiet 
Ironic as this is something your not

Copyright © Layla Riley-Hill

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