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While the sky weeps drops of woe
Every child of nature seeks to stow
Layers of warmth against the coming cold,
Children listen to tales told of long ago
Of journeys bold on ships like pearls,
Majestic winds in sails unfurled,
Engulfed with hope of promised gold.

Now winds of cold strip leaves of gold,
Odiously pulling lives from summer ease,
Venom’s cold from mountain tops to seize 
Every creature comfort from the sun,
Mayhap you can try to run
Beneath short cold days and long cold nights,
Even huddle in the fire’s light,
Ravenous cold still creeps through holes.

Fulcrum of a rose

My Heart ~
the pump station of my love,
my affection.
Like petals of a rose—
the fulcrum of my fragrance...
attracting kindred souls to my life,
like bees and butterflies to a bloom.

Rip my heart open—
you won’t find anything else
but goodness and kindness ~
the fabric that clothes my being.

When broken—
the pain is sharp and immense,
like a twisting knife
ripping a soul bare ~
bloodless,
yet endless,
like a drumbeat
without a drummer.

But it can harden—
stony, cold,
devoid of warmth or grace,
vengeful and wicked...
when pierced by a heartless mind.
Then it flows with invisible venom ~
clouding the brain like a purple haze,
killing, maiming...
capable of every evil.

Like roses—
with a range of wildly different scents ~
so is my life: love, hatred, joy—
kindness and wickedness all imbued.
Oftentimes, it sweetly lingers...
other times, it odiously putrefies.

Moons Chasity

“The moon’s vision of humanity 
Was something that it once desired  
Tinkle, swoouf, it pondered  
As it’s luminescence gazed at its prodigious oceans  
The defunct dissection of the body fell into silence as it glanced back
Clish, clash, it wavered  
It’s fluorescence gestured odiously 
Enraging it’s radiance with envy 
Woosh, clasps, oceans grew in his incensed intention  
It never had a society that walked on its ground 
A place, that humans recall home 
stomp, clasp, It thought
Oceans trickled with peril as the moon grew its waves   
Slash, sloosh, the clutter that pollutes the water clustered against its weight  
The moon then rebounded; remarking the objects  
Sling slang, swoosh, oceans sang it's mercy  
It’s reminiscence then discerned the cunning truth  
“The grass always seems greener on the other side”


The Family Philosophunculist

The Family Philosophunculist 

By Elton Camp

His yearly visits we detest
Our patience put to the test

He’s the worst we ever saw
My obnoxious bro-in-law

Naught that you can name
That’s not his special game

Every subject an expert
Odiously, he’s so curt

None may dare to doubt it
That he knows all about it

He’s to be held in great awe
The smartest we ever saw

How we wish he would desist 
The family philosophunculist

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