Metalled Poems | Examples


Old Car

It was like a fallen phoenix
Fired with rust and memories,
The body was open to the rooks, 
Its ribbed, bare chassis, opened arms,
Unsure whether to defend or
Or make love to the falling sky

The radiator, home to busy insects, 
Tiny carnivores, stood in sentinel,
A figurehead before the rotten mast;
For where had once been pedals
Now gaped rusty sink holes, 

Observers to the oily brew below
Sans wheels to show; wheels once 
Rolled, on busy metalled roads,
Where policemen, eagle-eyed

Checked for wily gangsters, riding 
On the leather seats inside: now
Rat food gone to ratty- hell, amid
The scrub and surrounds, tilted

Viking coffin, waiting for heat and
Cleansing, cracking-fire, opening
Doors to buckled, automotive rest
Categories: metalled, allegory, loss, memory,
Form: Free verse

Ode To a Legend

This chariot I ride, 
made for war 
Carries me far and wide 
This beauty, never seen before 

This machine 
takes me to the fight 
Strength to be seen, 
rising to the light 

This machine is part of me 
In formation we gather 
Metalled eagles that are free 

This hot summers day 
The sky so blue 
Come what may 
my life,on the line too 
Men and machine 
compete in the blue 

Like the knights of old 
fearless and bold 
We compete, 
not for blue ribbon 
instead blue sky 
and do......or die 

My horse, 
the mighty merlin 
stays the course 
My cannon shell 
hitting the enemy, 
giving him hell 

This aerial dance, 
parry and thrust 
to win,you must 
At altitude over France 

This graceful machine 
designed with vision 
By a man on a mission 
To be the best, 
A fighter pilots quest 
to reign supreme 

For this chariot ,I will never tire 
This beautiful machine 
Made by supermarine 
................the Spitfire
Categories: metalled, inspirational, uplifting, me, blue,
Form: I do not know?


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