Mental Deficiency Poems | Examples


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He was an ancient warrior from times of old 
back in the days when the sun was new 
and the stars at night were brilliant blue   
like the Canopus star he once knew 

Often, he was found rummaging the forest 
looking for the rarest mushrooms 
as the eagles flew he counted tree rings    
indenting the roots of his ancestry wings   

Then one day, he was reborn again 
in an era of squabble filled with wars 
silence became an oddity full of slew  
and "The Sacred" a rarity hidden in full view 

They tagged him "bipolar" with doctorate degree
this was a world of medicine & mental deficiency 
yesterday he howled at the moon * starkly stars 
today he is a sad man, longing for a trip to Mars 

He, ancient warrior of days of old 
fights the good battle everyday, 
mistletoe on oak, he holds his staff
all the time knowing time does pass. 

Written by: Mystic Rose 
Dedicated to a friend, who suffers from bipolar.
Categories: mental deficiency, analogy, sad,
Form: Rhyme

The Metaphor Made By a Bird

A silly bird is terrible in his intellect            
But his feather made him look perfect           
I think that he must be totally fooled
By the wrong messages from the  world  
          
This may be what people often say
The appearance of mental deficiency           
Fortunately, he still remembers to fly away            
When people are trying to catch him

Luckily birds follow different rules of the game           
Provided a man has no self-knowledge like him           
I am sure that there is a moment of time  
Such a person must be deceived and loss his fame
Categories: mental deficiency, analogy, bird, metaphor, philosophy,
Form: Verse


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