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To Cauldron Snout - part 1

It was around eleven when we had parked 
to step out on our walk to Cauldron Snout,
At first it was hard to find the waymarks 
weren't easy to spot as we looked about,

until we picked up with the Pennine Way.
Watching us from Widdybank farm
as we strode the well-trodden right of way
were belted Galloway, would they cause harm?
 
Below Cronkley Crag the upper Tees chattered,
keeping us company as we progressed
along Holmwath without any hazard.
Having looked at the map we had guessed

the gradient would only be gentle 
and not take more hours than just a couple.
But ahead a challenge looked monumental
testing whether our joints were supple.

Strewn below Falcon Clints was boulder
upon boulder, sculptured by the weather.
Our aging limbs soon felt even older,
balancing in this clambering endeavour.

We paused by an angler with rod and line;
having just caught a trout he was cheerful.
We let two men pass who'd come up behind,
then onward we struggled ever so careful,

reassuring ourselves that Cauldron Snout 
would be round the next bend – bend after bend, 
boulder on boulder – destiny in doubt.
Beauty was there to which we could attend:

harebells and scabious, cinquefoil and heather,
mountain pansies among many a bloom;
a duck and a dipper, and what was that feather?
Distractions delighting though none with perfume.

Eventually the Snout came into view;
an impressive cascade tumbling from high,
all the noisier the nearer we drew.
After more than three hours the time was nigh

to stop for sandwiches and fruit with a drink,
to rest weary limbs and blistering feet.
Pondering our return we began to think
tackling more boulders would be a risky feat.

Perusing the map we reckoned the road 
from the dam though longer seemed safer.
The steep rocky ascent was quite exposed.
Refreshed for the climb we coped with its labour

By the reservoir with water level low
we trudged upon tarmac enjoying the view
across to Cross Fell. With five miles to go
on a gentle descent a niggling grew

of threatening cramp in each of my thighs.
With fluids all drunk thirst was increasing
so with much relief we saw with our eyes
the Langdon Beck Hotel seemed to us pleasing.
Form: Quatrain


Forgotten

A young man was arrested
And was locked up in a cell.
He never thought his life would turn
Into a living hell.

The San Diego D.E.A.
Forgot that he was there.
For four days in a barren cell,
He suffered in despair.

He had no food or water
Nor a toilet or a sink.
His urine was the only choice
When he was forced to drink.

His hands were cuffed behind his back
But still he kicked and screamed.
He contemplated suicide,
The only choice, it seemed.

When agents found him, four days late,
And saw his sorry shape,
They took him to the hospital,
His overdue “escape.”

Though he’ll survive, his lawyers say
They plan to file a suit.
I hope somebody’s found at fault
And that they’ll prosecute.

This level of incompetence
Is truly monumental.
The D.E.A.’s response was
It was simply “accidental.”

The callousness of that remark
Proves they don’t have a clue;
For nightmares such as this,
A simple “sorry” just won’t do.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member October '61

We struggled along damp, smoke-filled streets;
leaves still summer green, 
a chilly breeze rustling some, turned golden early 
in anticipation of the fall.
Neil at one end of the log; 
me at the other.

Occasionally we paused our journey, rested;
took turns with the diminishing gobstopper;
and backward walking with the heavy branch.

Early October, our collecting started;
we had first-dibs on Ethel Jones' old settee,
two shabby chests of drawers,
about a mile of rotten fence,
branches collected from the woods,
assorted liberated shrubs,
and now, of course, a giant log.

We were to build 
the most monumental funeral pyre;
the street had ever seen,
topped with fabricated Guy,
long-wheeled from door to door
for a penny here or there.
It would be the biggest and the best,
standing proud in the bombed-out lot, 
that was our playground,
but once home to family and friends.

November fifth would come, 
the bonfire built, would fiercely burn;
cracking windows with the blistering heat
scorching paint on faded doors.
Part-cooked potatoes
thrown in the embers;
would later, held in hands 
be greedily eaten with a spoon;
steam rising from damp, woollen gloves.
Red noses, rosy fire burned cheeks,
sparklers waving patterns in the dark;
oohs, aahs; and gasps at fiery rockets,
whirling Catherine wheels and jumping jacks.

Then time for bed
Our grubby faces, 
smoked stenched hair and clothes
would last a week
'till bathday.


October Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh 
Date wrote: 03-October-2021

Premium Member Dizzy Goodfellow's White Horse

He came from the Dust Bowl in a terrible time
When his family were stricken with broken, dirt covered dreams.
The patchwork wooden shack they slept and ate in had all but tumbled
To a fate no one could repair or even had the desire to.
No crops, no means to grow anything to eat
In this sterile, fruitless, barren land they called home-
A time when the only thing farmers could harvest was your dreams.
There was very little left in his world except suffering.
He was a good boy like his name, and a small boy, not born that way, 
But fashioned by his lack of sustenance.
His life was laden with monumental emptiness and boredom
Enduringly waiting for better things to come.
He would make his own toys to play with
Out of anything that was some sort of surplus in his world of poverty.
And when he had nothing more except himself,
His idleness was spent by creating a circle dance-
A spiral game, to turn his spirit into a liberation to his salvation.
Singing a song he would bring his feet together to shuffle side by side
While creating his whirling motion like an old "spinning top" he used to have.
Round and round he would turn until he could turn no more
To finally stop as if some invisible force straight up and grabbed him.
His world spun around him, magically becoming a carousel
Where he heard music, laughter and felt giddy happiness
As he rode on the great white horse of his choice
Traveling with this bright and joyous carnival fancy
Taking him to a place where hardship lost its meaning.
He would perform his dance time after time
No one ever really cared about it, 
After all what was a young restless boy to do?

They never called him by his real name - Johnny Goodfellow
They always called him "Dizzy"
A name that would stick with him his entire long-lived life,
And follow him on a distant road of misadventure
Hard work, uninviting places, and downright unfriendly folks.......
But it didn't matter - he had learned early how to make his world alright  



September 2, 2019
"Bring a Character to Life" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:  Richard Lamoureux
Form: Narrative

WE'VE GOT WATER TO WALK ON

A storm is brewing
It’s coming to a head
The people are in danger
But by the Spirit we'll be led
The impact will be monumental
Affecting everyone at hand
But on the promises of God we will firmly stand

We’ve got water to walk on
In every aspect of our lives
But we can’t be doubtful
Like Peter was before Christ
We’ve got water to walk on
And we need to comprehend
That Jesus will catch us 
again and again

Jesus's divine authority Is the incarnate word
And it matters not whatever else you have heard
the Holy Communion and the holistic Resurrection of Christ
have given us the power to walk on the waters of life

We've got water to walk on 
In every aspect of our lives 
But we can't be doubtful 
Like Peter was before Christ
We've got water to walk on 
And we need to comprehend 
That Jesus will catch us
again and again

the boat depicted despair and humanity’s emotions
the Disciples the church full of believers and devotion
the sea the revelation and the resolution
and Jesus walking on water was the divine conclusion


we’ve got water to walk on 
in every aspect of our lives
and we can’t show doubt 
like Peter did before Christ
we’ve got water to walk on
And we need to comprehend
that Jesus will catch us
again and again

So be  not afraid as you walk on the waters of life
be of good courage in the midst of storms and strife
and never be fearful of an unknown destiny
when you serve a known God assuring you victory

we’ve got water to walk on
in every aspect of our lives
be anxious over nothing
and don’t act like Peter did before Christ
we’ve got water to walk on
and we need to comprehend 
that Jesus our Savior will  catch us 
again again and again

we’ve got water to walk on
in every aspect of our being
we’ve got water to walk on
and all we need to do is keep believing
 we’ve got water to walk on
Form: Ballad


Premium Member The Silent Kingdom’s Gentle Embrace

Down where the cypress trees cease their singing,
And the sun-wrought chariots are known no more,
A velour quietude is slowly clinging,
To the chalcedony marble shore.
Here, the silver Lethe murmurs, slow and deep,
A lullaby to souls who wish to sleep.
No longer do I chase the fleeing day,
No longer do I fight the golden light,
For I have found the shades of quiet gray,
That anchors the everlasting night.

O, softest fall, more gentle than the dew,
That rests upon Persephone’s soft bed,
Here in this solemn, silver-shadowed view,
Where all the hasty, thrashing thoughts are dead.
The helmet of the King is set aside,
To watch the slow and silent shades abide.
No fear can enter through the granite gates,
Where poppies grow in fields of endless hush,
Only the peaceful, tranquil waiting waits,
Without a clamor or a sudden rush.

The air is cool, a breath of quiet stone,
That soothes the burning forehead of the mind,
I leave the weight of standing all alone,
And leave the restless, warring winds behind.
Here, where the soul is safe, from sorrow free,
Wrapped in the calm, unmoving dark, I lie,
The silent King smiles directly at me,
Beneath the vast and starry-hearted sky.
And in this sleep, the soul begins to know,
That darkness is the sweetest, quiet friend,
A noiseless river that does softly flow,
With peace and dream-filled silence at the end.

There is a grandeur in this cold, still deep,
Where nothing stirs, and nothing dares to scream,
A slow, profound, and monumental sleep,
Can wash away the memory of a dream.
I fall, I drift, into the tranquil void,
Where shadows dance in slow and steady time,
Where every anxious fragment is destroyed,
And all the darkness flows in gentle rhyme.
It is the welcome rest, the final rest,
The softest, deepest, desired release,
A quiet, silent, and forgotten quest,
That leaves the weary traveler at peace.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member When the Dice Jumps the Velvet

He's nobody's best friend, but you've always been his.
All the significant others think he's lowbrow and obnoxious. 
Yes, on occasion he overindulges and offends
He's started and finished more than his share of scraps.
And yes, there was that monumental, marque eve 
when he sprayed the stilettos of your latest squeeze.
But he was also the only one left,
when that sequined petal turned into a weed of death.

He's nobody's best friend
the one who's always left out in the cold.
but he's the only one who tossed a ring
when the dice jumped velvet, 
when the breakers rose, 
and cracked the rudder of your soul.

So, hold on to that secondhand friend
because the others will surely blow away
when the maelstrom of blackness descends.

SPHINX STONE

 
I am Sphinx Stone, Sun stationed statue
silent sculptured synoptic, not marble or 
granite nor black tourmaline or crystal 
timelines cutting cross my magnetic 
magenta miracle to dissipate in dry 
desert winds, my gaze unmoved 
as quizzing quantum queens swirl 
around a Blue Planet ascending

Sphinx Stone gathering goddess’ goodness 
whilst slippery Sophi-el sprinkle sparkle 
Nile evaporations down Sumerian 
phantom phœnix photons
here I stare broken-nosed across vast 
expansions exiting or entering dual 
portal claws hot rooted into Violet Flames 
of Mother Earth belying my etheric origins

Did Leo descend from helium heavens 
painstakingly perfect from His tumultuous 
gut with goblets of gold, goblins gyrating ?
ask you may North African secrets slither 
no soiled sounds to simmer in sandy
storms or scarlet sunsets spreading 
spells, silence my singular speech to 
skulls of pharaohs or peasant alike

I am Sphinx Stone, my silhouette 
signposted in simple or significant sigils 
Saturn’s starlit sighs bypass not my 
knowing aloof yet vacant stare which 
agelessly gather stories of aeons 
imprinting dreams of God into manifest 
luminosity becoming your words on lion 
bones or this ephemeral page 

Sphinx Stone I see sabian riddled profiles 
making prolific progress patterns filled 
with steely grit, come now release 
agitated ages of bygone bitters to 
prick or paddle dimensions where 
appled anemones sing my stare into song to 
swallow swiftly sweetly slivers of sanctities

I remain Sphinx Stone stable 
unsullied forevermore
Form: Ballad

Premium Member Tensile Grace

Upon this monumental door, a sense of gratitude came before my eyes
If stabbed by paths of fear and wrath, new trust came pouring down
For behind the glittering forest, and a pomegrante stained sky
Enhancing was this quiet hour, in dwindling crimson crowned

There, in tensile grace, our meeting came a twofold surprise
Lightly splashed in backlight, where the tender grass had grown
Quietly grazing with grace, at first unaware of eyes
This thing of beauty revealed for my gladness alone

Suddenly the white tailed doe sensed me watching her
She perked up ears, alert to my presence, yet did not flee
Dare I even break the silence with a whispered word?
Or take a step per chance my foot might rustle twig or leaf?

This battle of wills...intense, a fleeting chance in time
Making no move...each of us transfixed, unable to breathe
Nor break this entrancing spell as her eyes met mine
Moments transpired...only sound of scarcely whistling breeze

Eyes like windows, of which the glass is tongue
She spoke to me, in hypnotic spell, I felt myself release
Our spirits crossed against the sky, beneath the copper trees
As if laced, were we, where spirits dwell, in universal peace


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By Carrie Richards, for Kristen Bruni's contest "What Animal Would I Be?"
Form: Quatrain

Mutiny In Trees

The water has receded
And I can see everything
in the bottom of the stream
Big pebbles of assorted colors
covering each other
frogs scampering about
and big fish meddling around
I stared in the silent water 
watching rubble floating on top 
giant rocks planted in the sand 
unaware of what is at hand
And openly denying that
they didn't know each other
I walked across the buried rock
to view the pebbles from all angles
With heightened curiosity
and  reflective ingenuity 
I dip my foot into the water 
but it was as cold as ice 
and something  strange 
was bubbling up inside
The sun shines vigorously
through the  tall trees
penetrating the water in the deep
I could see the color of  everything
the shape the depth and the size
The wind came to a stand still
And mad birds murmuring
precariously  from within
They start a mutiny in the trees 
Flying furiously  in the air 
waiting for the storm as it draws near
I crossed the stream 
and sat on a wooden bench
Contemplating numerous events 
The mysteries of nature 
birds talking to each other
And everyone screaming 
and shouting at one another 
I could not understand the birds language
but I could sense their troubled emotions 
Whistling
screeching
squealing
shirking
crying
hooting
tweeting 
sounds without description arouse in the tree
Different rhythm unfamiliar tune
Making everyone confused
Mozart in all his glory 
couldn't have created a better symphony 
Even among the tallest tree 
 nature is wailing in misery
I cannot fathom it all 
unparalleled music resonating in my head
and the trees  standing upright
scrutinizing this terrible plight
The leaves are not moving
And the bushes can feel the strangeness
the birds are whimpering
forcing nature to set an important meeting
Everyone gathers in Eleanor's park
waiting anxiously for the meeting to start
The wood pecker hammering the wood
and  the sweet John Che-wit
standing on the shaky branch
watching the cardinal reading the agenda
The cold and dry winter has returned
Hot spring  sweltering in summer
Every thing is green again and the trees 
waits patiently to dance again
The bird started a sudden commotion 
and the meeting ended in a raucous  demotion
Winter hits back with a monumental explosion.

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