Long Mindscape Poems

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Premium Member Magnified Myself


An inarticulate artist, 
I wanted to paint 
the lone life’s landscape,
            effervescent,
the construed course
of a river called desire
            unrestrained, 
meandering its way 
in self-possessed pattern,
I yearned.
In prime youth 
I thought I owned 
            solely
the whole canvas,
in self-satisfied strokes 
I smeared
            blithe,
the subterranean serenity
of psychic vales,
disappearing undepicted
in the fold of canvas,
            blank.

Free will amalgamated 
prodigal paints 
with shades of ego,
            copious,
contrived colors spilled
with spontaneity slide
from porous palette 
of permeable mind,
            expansive.
The banal painting
didn’t turn out 
to be a masterpiece,
the hidden designer 
created a mundane motif      
of listless life,
            destined.

Toward the hued horizon
of draping dawn,
drawn at canvas periphery,
my mental brush swept
            spellbound,
striving with sensuous drive
to capture the beauty
of unique chromatic lattice   
at the edge 
of the nascent sky,
            pristine.
In supercilious strides 
I trampled 
the malachite meadow,
turned wasteland, 
where I walked
            d i s t r a u g h t 
on my shadow,
            s h a t t e r e d.

On the bleak backdrop,
sinking forlorn 
            ordained,
within twilight zone, 
rinsed by sedate rays 
of the setting sun, 
my consumed essence                                   
gives perforce
            now 
the final strokes
of bare brush 
at the edge 
of convoluted canvas, 
where my senescent mindscape           
devout,         
is illumined 
by the eternal glow 
of divine light. 
Through the lens
of introspection
I see me
metamorphosed 
into a lengthening shadow,
            magnified 
bigger than myself,
            d i s i n t e g r a t e d.


Premium Member As Images Pause

Framed moments blink... a night of review
as snapshots glide on this mindscape
like tissue leaves bathed in reveries
before slumber’s pause.
Every motion, every image bursts
into tints of different life- stages.
Embers within me flash: the childhood
and adult shades encircling a moment; my essence
so ripe for more sequels yet to be born.

How voices of light enter the marrow
and wake to recite the stories
from girlhood fairs, early parental death, 
aborted friendships to mature love’s flame: I inhale
dusky  breath when musings fall 
like twigs on the chest of languid memoirs.
Yet, the stars' follow my shadow, 
healing brambles of thought...
a nightfall refreshed.


July Premiere Contest of Brian Strand
Form: Imagism

Premium Member Traversing the Trinity

In the dark alley of time my soul wanders 
With life stumbling on pitfalls of blunders   
The frailty of the indistinct fragile future 
Casts shadow of despair on my innate nature
That is consumed in the darkness tormenting    
Turning my spent spirit into Tamasic nothing. 

I search for a glittering highway to escape
And to carve for my life an egoistic shape
Configuring the elements of desire in essence
Chasing the migrating mirage of opulence
Until in the mindscape sprouts sagacious sense 
Not to be allured by Rajasic impermanence.

Detached from the transient life’s thread thin
I now sink to the depth of eternal soul within 
Where time is lost in the timeless deep silence 
Where the joy of living dances in resonance 
With the pristine perception rising from abyss  
I am then the supreme in sublime Sattvaic bliss. 

April 22, 2021
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Passion


The serenading stream leaps in swirling rapture
on the dancing shadows of the swaying trees.
The diamond dew drops draping the glinted grass 
put lilting latticed diadem on the malachite meadow.
The drizzling moon dust from the sequined sky
embellishes the pearlescent waves of the rolling sea.
In all these I look enthused for my muse.

Up above the majestic mountain’s sliding slopes
waits the sun-soaked summit of ecstasy to be scaled.
Down the verdant valley’s slithering spine 
cascades sapphire stream to the picturesque plains. 
The rain-washed sky spreads the tapestry of dreams 
of chromatic imagery on the rainbow-arched horizon. 
In all these I seek out fervently for my muse.

The scarlet sun rises with the grandeur of crystal dawn,
lifts the musk of miasma from the depth of despair.
The wind of imagination blows in mystique mindscape,
raises from dust the flecks of dormant feelings,
wafting in the surging storm of inventive impulse,
on its wings I fly inspired in the fantasy firmament. 
That’s when my passion makes me a poet.

Frangible Ego Abysmally Copes

Unrelenting blitzkrieg deadly
assault upon psyche
pounded defenseless
vulnerable mindscape accustomed
to shelter within aproned crease
mama proffered manna, especially

when untethered meek docile lad
subjected to blistering hellfire
infamous hoodlums wantonly unleashed
verbal bombardments lobbing poison
spear tipped invisible blackened barbs
manifold times more agonizing

piercing, targeting, xraying...
guaranteed fatal skull and crossbones
unseen insignia wrought utmost damage
one hundred percent accuracy
ferociously besieging, jackknifing, pummeling...
successfully character assassinating,

a diminutive boy cursed with ideal traits
strongly tempted, delectably savored,
violently bullied (short of physical
stature violated, though seditious)
emotional violation wrought lifelong
oppressive worthlessness complimented

amply by absolute zero self confidence
distilled thru conception in utero
until parturition on a bitterly cold
January thirteenth (apparently small,
medium forces at large, sans right
buffalo wing conspiracy) instigating

ear splitting wailing testing threshold
of tolerance, no crying game, but
palpable anatomical and physiological
dislocations afflicting yours truly
with breathing difficulty courtesy
submucous cleft palate pronouncing

strong nasality, when acquiring speaking
ability more cause to ridicule upon
commencing attendance within Lower
Providence School District, where kids
said nastiest, meanest, foulest, cruelest...

unsolicited comments pointedly jabbing air
mocking severe twang plus pigeon toed gait
the latter rectified with custom made
contrivance crafted by papa that forced
little feet turned outward during sleep,
which less significant aberration became

corrected as I got older, but self shaming
and blaming assimilated thru incessant
intimidation, inundation, invitation...
passive personality tacitly allowed,
provided, and enabled entire classroom
to assail helpless looking human creature
'pon entering home burst into tears!
Form: Bio


Premium Member Perpetuity Illusion


in delicate domain
of latticed life
at esoteric edge 
of sinking sky
   sanguine
hermit horizon 
shimmers sensibility 
in paled passion 
incited perception
     dawned
illumines insight
                       radiant

on convoluted contours 
of dismantled dream 
   adrift
whirlpool of pining 
swivels in intrinsic stream 
arcane mindscape 
    marooned
recedes unperceived 
into twilight obscurity
                       ordained 

final flow
of terminal notion
through insipid channel  
on platitude plateau
    obscure
constructs conduit  
for contemplation current 
destined for
integral fusion 
with supreme sea 
    absolute
the end embraces 
sublime serenity
                       reflective

psyche suffused 
with sunset spectrum
   fading
designs desire
   derelict
entrenched in 
perpetuity illusion
   innate
embeds eternal efflux 
in enlightened soul 
sailing implicitly 
to bay of bliss
                        buoyantly

Never To Old For the Sandman

Never To Old For The Sandman!

Ah...respite relished sleeping like a baby,
variations on theme I iterate
impossible to stave of sleepiness,
nor advantageous to struggle against weight
of heavy eyelids akin 
to bajillion tons of freight

after squeezing out every iota of energy,
whether mental or physical exhaustive state
subsequently pleasurable surrendering
into realm where unpredictable self portrait,
where pleasant dreams await
a personalized vividly dynamic

realm, where consciousness doth abdicate
analogous to A Stop at Willoughby
Season 1; Episode 30 of Twilight zone
May 6, 1960 - Original air date
though evocative images fill mindscape,
I immediately forget conglomerate

sans, illusory wonderful world
potential motherlode, did create
a bittersweet dire straight,
asper this aspiring scrivener
REM recall equals absolute zero
no matter awakening eye designate
natural process this body to facilitate

transitioning to formulate
after juncture of adequate
time ample restoration did satiate
yours truly revelled within tete a tete
among "FAKE" persons mine
unconscious did amazingly, gracefully,
and inexplicably generate.
Form: Imagism

Despair

Like a tumbleweed aimlessly blowing in the wind
across infinitely open and wide prairie home companion land
(which wasteland famously epitomized by T.S. Elliot)
a barren vista ravages metaphorical landscape
of one measly mortal malcontent male
bumping and scraping along accursed habiliment
just barely avoiding and dodging diabolical demons
mercilessly and unrelentingly ready
to seduce this somewhat sanguine Simian
who finds himself amidst the pitfalls
of a tortured and twisted existence
racked with pinions describe bing
a demonic dragon filled dungeon
damp, dark, demented domains –
a veritable no man’s land
impossible to escape no matter how fast I -
as a foo fighter flee
from the fearful, fierce-some phantasmagoric forms
figments of my imagination seemingly real
tangible as bone and flesh
who haunt sacred crowded house of slumber
transmogrify me into a loathsome madman
ranting raving senseless gibberish and sic gobbledygook
perceived as metaphysically n philosophically insane
as soundgarden syllabification
from one womanly World Wide Web wayfarer
which virtual vagabond venerates vowels
and possesses means and tees to till verse
akin to a sorceress who waves a magic wand 
to produce supreme sentences
weaves tantalizing terrific tweed topographic tundra’s
that this admirer of her artful and colorful poetic endeavors
prompts me to accompany my mindscape 
as a thought-provoking troubadour
amidst the information super byways and highways
along winding labyrinths of critical thinking
or simply stepping o'er rolling stones 
of silly rhymes without wing less reason
all the while giving subtle egress
into that chamber of secrets
long kept shut tight to maintain 
that sure footed stance of solitude
whose only entities happened 
to constitute trappings of literary lugubriousness
those tombs of largesse identified 
as great works and masterpieces of literature
yet careful to avoid complete intimacy
lest that cherished solitude shattered
and a heart rent asunder
twin tower ring inferno imp perils of loss that provide
an understandable cautionary tale
to the author of this rambling missive
a most profoundly perceptive acute Ape man
touched to the quick with a bit of angel dust
aware that this agonized and angst riddled  arboreal beast
contents himself with the confines of cyberspace!
Form: Elegy

Premium Member Which Fire Is Eternal

My soul wanders in the dark alley within me,  
plunges in the abyss of discontent.    
The unsatiated life, unframed and uncertain, 
casts a formless shadow of ambiguity on the being,
that flares up as anguish in the carnival of darkness,    
burning my essence to ashes of bleak nothingness.

In the gloom of the dismal opaque night,
across the murky landscape of the formidable fate,
I need to take the ordained last journey committed,
for I have promises waiting to be kept,
but I lose the tortuous track travelling the illusive time  
in the tormenting gloom of the labyrinth.

The holy fire of spirit is then ignited within me 
to incinerate the spreading wings of the deluding ego,
glows the realigned elements of the dormant force,
shows me the path away from the illusive self-worth,
and flashes in the mindscape the sagacious sense, 
not to be induced by the imprudent impermanence. 

At the fringe of the fleeting forlorn moments, 
shaping the perspective of introspection, 
and shining in the inner resplendent heavenly light,
I see the blazing sunrise in the dawn of revelation.
The rays of hope radiating from the hued horizon,  
illumines the dark recess of the morose mind. 

The consciousness in the fold of timeless inner solitude 
kindles the concealed candle of the almighty,
that burns with the radiance of the eternal fire,
suffusing me with the glow of sublime bliss, 
I carry within me beyond the shadow of strife as I travel
on the promised path to the lighted sanctum of divinity.

_________________

February 26, 2023
Contest : Which Fire Is Eternal
Sponsored by : Joe Maverick

Premium Member Dismantled Rainbow


Fragile resolve aspires 
to capture the residual rainbow, 
weaves the lattice of life 
with spectral ribbons,
turns into a self-destructive 
psychosis syndrome
that fails to fling 
the insane illusion 
in the cloud of dreams,
for it has hypnotic leverage 
on the mind, 
mangled by 
s   t   o   r   m.

Wedged by the splitting bevel 
of slashing time,
the frail fragments of failure 
get lacerated from life,
scatter on the path
to the rainbow, 
yet untraveled, 
meanders marooned
in debris of derelict dreams,
disappear down the deep sinkhole 
of dusky oblivion. 

In lucent mystique mind,
transmuting thoughts 
flash on
ebony emotions.
Absolved of self-qualm
psychic crystal sparkles 
in sense stars’ aurora flare,
traces the prime trajectory
from the cosmic soul’s 
nebulous abyss,
within.

In the mesmeric meadow
of the inner topography, 
seraphic shadows dance mystified
with gorgeous sequined glitter 
of the sensuous stardust 
in the tune of
buoyant bliss.
The discernment mindscape 
makes the montage 
of the existential rainbow,
d  i  s  m  a  n  t  l  e  d.

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