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My Fair Lady

You came into my life
Like a breath of fresh air
Like a gust of fragrance
Like a passing cool breeze
Like a meandering stream
Like a cascading waterfall
Like the robust rising sun
Like the gleaming full moon
Like the dancing flame of a candle
Like a sparkling gem
Like the smile of a child
Like a coy bride
Like the blazing colors of fall
Like the rebirth of Nature in spring
Like the thrill of a roller coaster ride
Like the wanderer finding a home.

You permeate my soul, my being
I see you in the grace of Nature
I see you in the potency of the prayer
I see you in my dreams
I think of you and
feel you by my side -
Every moment, every breath.

For once I am at peace,
I have no complaints with the world,
Everything seems to 
appear as it should be,
I find ways to be grateful.

You are most beautiful,
Most enduring,
Most heartening;
Life is a journey
You, its destination.

Like a flickering light
at the end of the tunnel, 
Like a shimmering mirage
to a weary wayfarer,
Like the glimmering North Star
to a lost seafarer,
Oh, stay forever
within my sight, my love,
Lest I wander off
Alone and lost!


~07/04/14
~Rhonda Johnson-Saunders's contest:"Your Most Romantic Poem of 2014"
Form: Lyric


Premium Member The Red Jacket

This morning, earlier than normal, you arose for work
This was long before the coffee pot began to perk

I felt you stirring, and after a while, I saw you down the hall
A little later, you quietly informed me of the meaning of it all

I could tell that you needed to run
So I arose to see you off, and to say goodbye
With my eyes, I saw your beauty and brightness
You were shinning like today’s light in the morning sky

I remember telling before that you look great in bright colors
But today, you looked gorgeous and even a bit exceptional
Had I not paused to observe and pay you a deserving compliment,
I would have been undeserving of you, and worst than a common criminal

I noticed that you were so stunningly dressed in red;
But when I reached for you, I saw more that just red
I embraced you just before you backed out of the garage
Clearly that was when I saw “that something special” about you
Earlier, I had glanced it just before I arose from bed

When I embraced you, I saw close up the style of your hair
I felt your warmth and softness like a breath of fresh air
With a presence so smooth, you looked lovely and sweet to me
And O my, that fitted red jacket you were wearing was a sight to see
041510 PS Contest, An Expression of Love, Frank Herrera
Form: Prose

Lingo

We haven't known each other long
But we've been talking like best friends
Her mannerisms are becoming second nature
A second wind the way they nurture my nerves
She's got a smile that's like a breath of fresh air
She's got me laughing more than usual 
And I can’t seem to catch the air
Unusual almost scary the way we peanut butter and jelly 
Me + you is becoming our own lingo 
A foreign language to others 
Your pauses whisper to my ears
Drumming my heart into a baseline that will never flat line
Bottom line, you are precious to me
A darling so gorgeous to me
Your feelings hit me like the waves of your diction
Tell me what my laugh says to you
Tell me how my eyes enunciate your gaze
Tell me to read the braille of your goosebumps
And I'll tell you what your poems say to me
I'll tell you how my pen says to hold you gently 
Let's hold this moment softly
Because to find someone who can sculpt time 
Is rare,
You make the clock move at our pace
And I'm loving the two step of our cadence
I want to lean on you the way I'm relaxing in this conversation
Destination to no end
I feel like the richest man ever with her million dollar smile
Her smile steals from my heart and I don't mind one bit 
Because that smile says everything I can't 
Your eyes decipher my code
I’ve never felt this comfortable with vulnerability 
I love looking out the window of our lingo 
Opening the door to the depth of questions
Taking me closer to you
I just want to be closer to you
But right now I'm enjoying the heart to heart
p.s. you + me is becoming my favorite song…
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My Dearest Love - the Cinquain Style

~My  Dearest   Love ~
( Cinquain  Suite )



For you 
My  love  grows more
With  heart  so full  of  love
While dreaming  of you always 'neath
Moon  stars

So  soft
Your  love just  comes
Like  a  breath  of   fresh  air
I  feel  your presence inside  me
Day  night

You  are
My  shining  star
My  only one true  love
My love  for you will  always shine
So  true

My  sweet
Love  I   love you
So  and  very much  more 
For you my loves  forever and
Ever.



Dorian  Petersen  Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017


July.21.2017



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~Author's Notes:

The  " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

He Got

He Got
He got the whole world in his hands
Yes that's what I said 
People are choosing faith over Fear
Our souls are no longer dead 
They are refreshed
Despite this mess
That's going on 
In this world 
A virus ?? that's  making us loose sight 
Get on your knees in the day and at night
Know that in the midst it's going to be alright 
He got the whole world In his hands and he holds us close to his heart 
He's like a breath of fresh air
That we can not afford to loose 
He is reaching out to us 
So you have to choose 
Choose to open up your heart 
Know that he will guide
One thing for certain 
He will never leave  your side
Don't hide don't live in fear 
Only thing he wants to do is make sure you hear 
Hear his voice 
Clear 
Don't be afraid for he is going to protect
In a world that is full of neglect
I hope you all lean toward him for where your help coming from
He will patch you up when you feel numb 
And if ever we need inspiration here is some 
We will and shall overcome 

Written by: Concetta Hardnett
03/22/2020


Melancholy of Serendipity

Met you when I least expected,
Breezed past me like a breath of fresh air.
At the time, I didn't pay heed;
Now I drown in despair.

Sent to me just before my dark times,
The light that preceded my darkness.
The light in my life, encompassed by hate—
For myself alone, I must state.

Elegant in stature, I continue to pursue.
I have to give praise where it is due.
Don't choose me.
Don't consider it.
I'll only bring sadness.
I'll only bring boredom.
I truly eclipse your character.

Hate for myself I must endure.
No choice in the matter; I'm simply a flaw.
Cursed by the standards of society,
Failed to comply with the criteria of the world.

Who am I to search for happiness?
Truly a troubled soul.
© Will Will  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member My Dearest Love - the Cinquain Style

~ My   Dearest   Love ~
( Cinquain  Suite )



~O~


For you 
My  love  grows more
With  heart  so full  of  love
While dreaming  of you always 'neath
Moon  stars


o~ O ~o


So  soft
Your  love just  comes
Like  a  breath  of   fresh  air
I  feel  your presence inside  me
Day  night


o~ O ~o


You  are
My  shining  star
My  only one true  love
My love  for you will  always shine
So  true


o~ O ~o


My  sweet
Love  I   love you
So  and  very much  more 
For you my loves  forever and
Ever.



~O~



Dorian  Petersen  Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017



February.05.2020





“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 





~Author's Notes:

The  " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the American Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

Premium Member Five Senses Plus One

>>>>>>>>>  Seeing a moment in life when time passed, I say
                           like a new pearl added too, upon a string of others,
                                transcends, crystalize into your present,

                             Touch someone with your words of wisdom, know
                               your remark transcends, becomes their own,
                                 solidifies into their circumstances,

                           Speak from your mind, that which came from your heart
                                  so too, truly touch one, an others soul,
                                        like a breath of fresh air,

                              Hear sounds of nature, whispering winds enchants,
                               like ancient mariners set a message in a bottle
                                 sent by sea, too anyone, for your well being,

                                Smell fragrant flowers that will come your way
                        some unexpected, your senses, six found, 'sense of direction',
                         will bring you joy, love, feeling of peace, on any given day

The Wrong Number

She called my number by mistake,
Still her voice I just couldn't shake,
Every word I could still hear,
Just as if she was whispering in my ear,
Not knowing the number to that phone line,
I simply dialed *69,
Not a second seemed to have past,
Before I heard her voice at last,
I couldn't explain the way I'd act,
But had to know her that was a fact,
She giggled some what amused,
And I thought my eggo would soon be bruised,
Then she said that if it must be,
Later today she'd meet me,
Asking her just where to go,
And just how it was her would I know,
She said I'd know her by the voice,
And where to go was my own choice,
The meeting came way to soon,
Meeting for lunch just after noon,
At one woman I stared and was caught,
Thank God it was her looking just as I'd thought,
She kissed me with just a little tug,
Then wrapped her arms around me for a big hug,
I just about fell off of my feet,
That's when she guided me inside for something to eat,
I was nervous not knowing what was in-store,
It's not like I had done this before,
The afternoon we just laughed and joked
Plus now and then went outside and smoked,
She was like a breath of fresh air,
How lucky I felt that she was there,
Now we had come to the parting time,
She said here's my number but use your own dime,
The excitement of her voice will always last,
Even though now we're friends with a past!

An Uncle Charlie Original



© 2008 unclecharlie
© Bill Ryan  Create an image from this poem.
Form:

Premium Member My Dearest Love - the Cinquain Style

~ My   Dearest   Love ~
( Cinquain  Suite )



For you 
My  love  grows more
With  heart  so full  of  love
While dreaming  of you always 'neath
Moon  stars

o~ O ~o

So  soft
Your  love just  comes
Like  a  breath  of   fresh  air
I  feel  your presence inside  me
Day  night

o~ O ~o

You  are
My  shining  star
My  only one true  love
My love  for you will  always shine
So  true

o~ O ~o

My  sweet
Love  I   love you
So  and  very much  more 
For you my loves  forever and
Ever.



Dorian  Petersen  Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017



May.04.2018



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~Author's Notes:

The  " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the American Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

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