Long Feed back Poems

In the cottage Dyndoeth spoke with Joulupukki.  
     “I simply do not see any way that you can accomplish the goals you have set in the amount of time that...

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I don’t write this for feed back or reaction 
as it's not my need too feel satisfaction 
I haven't invested nor look to progress
I'm just restless with rhymes ink press
them to an instrumental that's all
not...

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10 29 08

Senator Obama said it's time for a change
While Senator McCain lashes out about his age
Obama's cool-calm and collected
He never let's his opponent see him break a sweat
Athough McCain says that he's still a...

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hypothetically I know the reason you telling me that I'm the reason... the real reason you
telling me that your sick of straight missing me it’s just a season,

Like every time I foul up, make up,...

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Once again i am caught in this cage, 
Just when i thought i'v opened a new page.
I fall back right back into the hole i crawled out from,
waiting for someone to help me, but no...

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These days, actors and singers serve my catapult mayhem, 
sometimes they are catalyst too!
I sing in between their lines of songs
their churned up recorded whims, hums, and candid cataracts! 
And some days, whence things get...

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I wasn’t asking for you to take control
I had no one in my corner 
show support the asked of role 
as I was the performer

My situation my experience 
a plan I created to crack on
You...

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I think Poetrysoup should put the "fav poet", "fav poem" option at the bottom,
because if you're like me it's is an activity that gets forgotten.

You sit and reflect at what was written so perfect,
and in...

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I woke up drenched in sweat
Sometimes that feels like a purge
I'm sure it's just linked to summer and the wrong choice of pyjamas, but I felt better
I spoke and the things that were unheard yesterday...

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Woman
This is a feedback
It is about
The little time
Our hands were 
Drunk and electrified
It is about
The little endless time
When we opened
A little window
Wide enough
To catch the sky
And weight it
Like weighting
A healthy new 
Born

It is not important...

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Artificial Intelligence grows and knows
As machines get taught to learn.
More and more machines decide what you would like
To watch next on Netflix or where to go on your next holiday.
Machines monitor your preferences all the...

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"Ma "Ma I wish you were still here we need to talk
I need feed back from you because you understood
This world is trying to swallow me up and spit me out
you are not here to...

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Ripples


A sudden chime reiterates
She touches the world
A fingertip
And ripples sent
Resolves
Inward
Feed back
Distant

Hits resounding light
Fluent curls
She signals
Waves repeating
Sent ripples
Outward
Washing through
Eternal

A holding breath for a moment
Landscaping emotions
Swell
As she dips
Down upon the re-entry
Calling ripples sent
On waking
Reappearing

Gathers the hems and...

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This year has had a lot of ups and downs,
Which in some cases I’ve had to stand my grounds,
I’ve unfortunately also had a lot of break downs,
And also had plenty of break outs,

I honestly don’t...

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being me not self centered 
Caring and kind hoping to find 
The best there is in human kind
Trying not to be judgmental 
At the same time be conversational
Trying to see both sides as a one...

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CECILIA

Writing poems in the deep of the night
And hoping I might 
Get response to them
I got up to go on line 
Before I got back to bed
Found you’d sent me a sign

Oh! Cecilia.  
You’ve...

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I've tried summer time;
With a winter mix
Didn't seem to help none
And it made me very sick
didn't  seem to help me none
Had my socks and shoes off walked three miles through the pouring rain and
got...

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a muddy way has to be crossed
                            ...

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a long cotton thread 
                              ...

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God can’t fix something if we don’t give it all to Him.  I won’t say that I understand 
your situation because each situation is different, but I do understand what it is to 
lose...

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Night following day
Commonplace and unremarked
Scales fall from our eyes
Starlight pierces mind and soul
God revealed if one but looks!





A poem dedicated to my friends Eileen, Mary Jo and Anne-Lise. Thank you for you patience with me.
with...

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