Bl Devnath Poet Verse

Fruits of Patience

a muddy way has to be crossed
                                   wait until it becomes dry 
                                     it's raining too much 
                               take shelter somewhere suitable
                              it's to dark night if now facing why?
                        certainly patience's lost while it was needed
                       is it not that suffering feed back for the same
                      if a banana is blew to ripen before its due time
                                everything becomes useless
                         so patience is must to have a suit fruit

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 1, 2017 at 6:10 PM Yes it takes patience to grow a fruit. That is so true. have a nice evening my friend.

Lynn Marie September 28, 2017 at 3:12 AM Ooh I I just love the 'banana' line. What a great message, so creatively crafted. Patience with myself is a slow work in progress...lol yet your beautiful poem helps me to understand so much better. thank you BL:) a fave Bl Devnath October 1, 2017 at 1:39 PM Thanks my dear lovely friend for your appreciation and for keeping this poem in your fave. list. Loved always...........,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2017 at 1:49 PM - You are completely right, dear friend - Unfortunately, my patience is not "very long" ... :))) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath September 23, 2017 at 2:36 PM You are genius i know and have a lot of patience which is enough to have victory. Thanks my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl