Long Critiqued Poems

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Tea and Poetry In the Ides of March - Part Three

Again the alarm is set.

Strawberries, date squares…Yum, Yum.   

The alarm rings again. The tea party is over.

 She returns to her perch where her wings are immediately clipped by the Bald Eagle who...

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Categories: critiqued, satire,
Form: Free verse


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The Poetic Genius of Percy Bysshe Shelley

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"Gemini, in light of the following assessment of Percy Bysshe's Shelley verbal and/or literary IQ and level of poetic intelligence and giftedness by you (from another conversation), how much higher than 175 IQ is my...

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Categories: critiqued, history, literature, poems, poetry, poets, romantic, visionary,
Form: Prose
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Chatgpt-4 Shockingly Rates One of My Sonnets a 94 Out of 100

“ChatGPT-4, can you give me your literary opinion on the following sonnet? By the way, it is preambled by an explanatory prolegomenon which discusses the sonnet’s theme and my inspiration for composing it:”

Mental “Masturbation”

(The title...

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Categories: critiqued, extended metaphor, satire, sin, smart,
Form: Sonnet
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I Hear He's a Winner

Bolsonaro was president of Brazil from 2019 to 2023.
Former army officer and right-wing nationalist who revered Brazil's 1964–1985 military rule.
Jair Bolsonaro sought to arm a disarmed nation.
To a place where gun ownership meant freedom.
Anti-establishment populism...

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© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: critiqued, analogy, bereavement, celebrity, international, political,
Form: Bio

Creativity of Universe

SENSE OF UNIVERSAL CREATIVITY CONCEPT BEYOND COSMIC CREATURES REVIEW.
WHY, HOW, WHEN, WHO DESIGNED THE SYLLOGE KNOW HOW CREATOR ONLY KEN. 
OBVIOUSLY, SINCE INCEPTION OF MACROCOSMOS INFINITY TIMES LAPSED THE COINER SELF EXISTENCE HYPOTHESIS GIST AND...

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Categories: critiqued, adventure, allah, analogy, art, bible, birth, blessing,
Form: Prose Poetry


Today

Untaught vocabulary seems to retard
our insanity multiplied by free speech
which becomes nothing more then
profanity to the public ear when not heard
through the committed

Outsourced, spun and sold to the masses
by the media who wish to entrance...

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Categories: critiqued, allusion, america, angst, betrayal, class, corruption, metaphor,
Form: Free verse

Hide the Details


Everybody got a Hollywood life story
to tell
More meat on the bone
give juicier bites 
to sell
Nobody ever turns in a tarnished silver screenplay
Those warts and mistakes
get Photoshop casting couch edited away
Baby Jane rude attitude don’t make...

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Categories: critiqued, allegory, fun, metaphor, word play,
Form: Vogon Poetry

First Amendment In Jeopardy

Lifeblood of democracy hemorrhaging
ousting the "FAKE" president only recourse
to staunch impending grim demise,
since forefathers drafted
United States Constitution
ratified more'n two centuries ago

hoi polloi must take to the streets
denouncing severe curtailment
impinging sacred freedom of speech
linkedin with paramount...

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Categories: critiqued, 11th grade, 12th grade, abuse, eulogy, gospel,
Form: Ode
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Goodbye Carolyn

Not once did our physical paths ever cross,
nor heard we each others voice.  But her
picture was observed after being informed              ...

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Categories: critiqued, tribute,
Form: Verse

Never Satisfied

I have seen men carved from stone
rising above the Black Hills,
I’ve seen ancient trees born back when
Ceaser still worked his will,
felt a thundering water pound down,
and from four Great Lakes drain,
I have known the prairie...

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Categories: critiqued, confusion, people, perspective, philosophy, places, travel, truth,
Form: Rhyme

More n nine months on

More'n nine months on...

and still I feel infuriated at myself
concerning squandered funds
passively, senselessly, and willingly
surrendered nest egg
to computer hackers
(imposters, jackknifing, and liquidating)
coercing me to forfeit funds,
whereby yours truly (me) blindsided
thru convincing telephonic dialogue
witnessing unquestioned trust

I...

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Categories: critiqued, abuse, anger, angst, bereavement, crush, fate, heartbroken,
Form: Free verse
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All In a Day

he got up at bedtime stretched and gathered the sheets

shook up the pillows sorted the pages and went to his desk

thoughts and emotions dripped from fine ink on paper

looked at a day’s worth of poetry...

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Categories: critiqued, inspirational,
Form: Free verse
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ART

ART

A esthete, I am for I love, love and appreciate works of art and
B eautiful things including alluring women and good looking men.
C reativity of the artists on display, being appreciated and critiqued.
D ance, movements...

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Categories: critiqued, art,
Form: Abecedarian
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Our Uniqueness

There is a world within our language that’s we’ve spoken since our childhood…
but when it is misused…does more harm than good.

DIFFERENT is the word and I wonder…wouldn’t it cause less fuss…
If when we saw another...

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© Jim Yerman  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: critiqued, inspiration,
Form: Rhyme

Don'T Reed

Anxiety peak's as mundane attention seeks.
Fear and excitement compete as boredom seeps.
This powerful small action is not an option I possess.
My desire to please is within reach, the winner of an underdog's match.
Adrenaline a premature...

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Categories: critiqued, life,
Form: Free verse

Love Misconception

In all honesty
I believe Love is actually blind
That she lost her road
And headed straight 
Into the mess, she lays in today
I hope we all find her, bathe her and clothe her
Cos she's really a mess...

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© Arum Dusu   Create an image from this poem.
Categories: critiqued, bible, first love, love, relationship, sad love,
Form: Free verse
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Unique

I do not like the word different…it cuts too much like a knife
It adds to the trouble in our world…it causes so much strife.

When we see someone as different fear seeps into our minds
and where...

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© Jim Yerman  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: critiqued, inspiration,
Form: Verse

Everytime a Line I Begin To Write I Also Hear a A Sigh

Everytime I begin to start to write

A single line

I so too also hear

A deep intake of breath sigh and sneer

Which fills me full of dread and fear

As I also in tern then see your eyes...

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Categories: critiqued, celebration,
Form: Free verse
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Between Faraway Distance Is the Poet and I

BETWEEN FARAWAY DISTANCE is THE POET and I

Treacherous stretches mounds of greens feed fresh the mind. . .

never ever upon a spangled heavens or in seagulls’ crash - hush,
nor on echoed notes of tweeting nightingales...

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Categories: critiqued, inspiration, love, poetry, space, true love,
Form: Free verse

One Night Out

daytime begins doesnt mean the nightmare ends.elvis lives doesnt mean he's at home.
walking around like a dead man walking,breathing through a tube.
hands cold and brittle hair falling out in patches.
a once handsome youg man turned...

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Categories: critiqued, adventurelonging, hope, time,
Form: I do not know?

Pain

Pain—the best part of being human
Pain—the worse part of being me
Pain—a process of refining
Pain—an aftermath of being mean
Pain—the longings of young people
Pain—a blessing or a curse
Pain is just pain
Nothing more and nothing less

Pain—a redflag to...

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© Arum Dusu   Create an image from this poem.
Categories: critiqued, deep, depression, life, pain, spoken word, stress,
Form: I do not know?

True Poets should be Proud

To all those who perpetually write, sometimes between conflicted thoughts are reeling. It’s not perspicacity in you that you should seek, but the validity of your true feeling. A poem that to you may seem...

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Categories: critiqued, appreciation, confidence, devotion, emotions, encouraging, identity, integrity,
Form: Rhyme

Our Rights

The rights to pursue happiness? Our rights to religious freedom? Right not to be discriminated based on race, creed or color? These our the civil rights that our forefather’s granted unto us...based on denied practices...

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Categories: critiqued, religion, social, marriage, marriage, rights,
Form: Lay

A Critical Review

You get to have a life review when you die -
or so I am told.
The hope of a do-over has me living here still
on this tiny blue planet on the far edge of nowhere,
with the...

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Categories: critiqued, poetry,
Form: Free verse

Read

I know it’s wrong to want and such
I really do not ask of much
There’s but one thing I ask of you
If I read yours, please read mine too

It seems that just so many here
Choose not...

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Categories: critiqued, on writing and words, write, write,
Form: Quatrain
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