Liquidized Poems | Examples


The Ravishing Rain

Drizzling, dazzling
splinters of diamond
          Shards of crystal
or  liquidized glass!
      Transparent drops
from a translucent sky. 

       Ooh, that lucid lustre:
No wonder they say,
there's something sexy about the rain
Atleast it does seem to drive
      dripping lovers insane. 

       And then as if frenzied, suddenly excited 
the drizzle converts into a heavy downpour
         as thunders bellow and thunders roar
    as rivers swell and rivers soar. 

Rain battering our rooftop
       like needless war drums
or heedless bass drums
     The heavens having opened
to announce a cloud burst
Till it's said to be raining cats and dogs
or more realistically, fishes and frogs! 

               O' God bless the nimbus
Those soaking cotton wool puffs in the sky
 Those candy floss rainclouds sailing by.
Categories: liquidized, rain,
Form: Villanelle

A Hurrying Against An Inspection

A means was hurriedly devised
To have their profiles revised,
A great deal improvised
And staff strictly supervised…

Also, a means to be apprised
Of Interview questions not surmised,
To have them earlier analyzed
For  minds to be better advised…

And what it should cost summarized
To have the inspector’s toilet standardized,
His official car customized
And reserved fruits liquidized!

All ahead of his notified inspections
With staff-dropping intentions.
Categories: liquidized, anxiety, career, education, smart,
Form: Rhyme


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