In Jug Poems | Examples


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Waffle House

The door rings,
I look up,
someone with someone else,
back to my eggs and hash browns.
The door rings
Spatulas knell the griddle.
The skinny cook yells in Kentucky Yiddish.
Flapjacks slap in midair,
syrup dongs in jug and jar.

Chants In a Breakfast Diner

The door rings
I look up 
then
back to my eggs and hash browns.

The door rings
I look up
nobody I know,
my first time here
why should I know anyone!
Back to the eggs.

Two sunny-side-up,
the busting of yellow yokes
with a tip of toast --- O Lordy.

I look up
the waitress has bodacious tats,
a phone bursts into song
 another vibrates
as loud as a sleeping panther.

The door rings
creamy salutations
of comfort and grease.
Spoons jangle on tinkling handles,
spatulas knell upon the  griddle.

A buttery booth crush
a flush-faced coffee klatch.
The skinny cook yells in Kentucky Yiddish.
I look up 
flapjacks slap air
syrup pours and dongs in jug and jar.

The door chants and chimes -
Hallelujah for this ring-a-ding diner
and our Waffle House hunger.

He Drank Soap Water

soap water in jug
thirsty brother drank it all~
remarked "tasted strange"

Note : This actually happened. Upset brother said  you should have kept it sink. I asked why you drank all when taste was strange?

Date: 1/13/2021


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