Rama Balasubramanian Poet Senryu

He Drank Soap Water

soap water in jug
thirsty brother drank it all~
remarked "tasted strange"

Note : This actually happened. Upset brother said  you should have kept it sink. I asked why you drank all when taste was strange?

Date: 1/13/2021

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Krish Radhakrishna January 13, 2021 at 5:59 AM frothed” tastes like a rug”! Soap water is terrible to drink! one way of keeping relationships clean! Rama Balasubramanian January 13, 2021 at 9:34 AM Felt strange, should have stopped but he still drank it, stupidity. Thanks for reading and comments. It is a pleasure to see you on my page. Take care, Rama