A man is like a Sunrise amber in hue
On rising, you feel all his energy around you
through my eyes, seeing … strength reflecting
like sunrays aligning out towards the sky
If a problem shall arise … self-sacrificing will
resolve it at that time
A man can be attentive …will keep you in mind
with every throb of his heart … will keep your soul
Glistening … like diamonds flowing … on top of a sea
through my eyes, seeing this … makes me smile … by him giving
the right amount of Sunshine
A man can … sway as tidal waves in the sea…drifting will bring
different items to the shore’s feet
through my eyes, seeing this … It may stop … but sometime later
the driftage will restart … Sunlight will continue to burn your heart
A man can be passionate about abstaining from
shining … rays the other way ... being in just one
place is where … his beam of light is frayed
through my eyes, seeing this man … a Sunset grayish in hue
not in the distance as I thought … standing right
here glowing and shining next to me … and this man is a Sunrise amber in hue
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