A Man

A man is like a Sunrise amber in hue
On rising, you feel all his energy around you 
through my eyes, seeing … strength reflecting 
like sunrays aligning out towards the sky 
If a problem shall arise … self-sacrificing will 
resolve it at that time 
 
A man can be attentive …will keep you in mind
with every throb of his heart … will keep your soul 
Glistening … like diamonds flowing … on top of a sea 
through my eyes, seeing this … makes me smile … by him giving 
the right amount of Sunshine

A man can … sway as tidal waves in the sea…drifting will bring 
different items to the shore’s feet 
through my eyes, seeing this … It may stop … but sometime later
the driftage will restart … Sunlight will continue to burn your heart

A man can be passionate about abstaining from 
shining … rays the other way ... being in just one 
place is where … his beam of light is frayed
through my eyes, seeing this man … a Sunset grayish in hue 
not in the distance as I thought … standing right
here glowing and shining next to me … and this man is a Sunrise amber in hue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/29/2012 7:00:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this great write, dear Maxeen! Kudos... love and hugs, Jack
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Date: 8/16/2012 11:49:00 PM
This is a fascinatingly imaginative way to describe the man of your dreams. Good write.
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Maxeen Dennis
Date: 8/21/2012 11:03:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/6/2012 7:41:00 AM
Oh wow...you disappear and come back to a splendid write Maxeen!!! Excellent piece of art here!!!
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Maxeen Dennis
Date: 8/7/2012 8:12:00 PM
Thanks Pace, G!
Date: 8/6/2012 4:55:00 AM
A wonderful picture of man in your poem, Maxeen! Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful time/day!
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Maxeen Dennis
Date: 8/7/2012 8:13:00 PM
Thanks Leonora!
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