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Premium Member Whisky Moment

~the Fear of Never~ A DRINK TO REMEMBER!


   And the fire catches every time, my heart needs a sip
I bear no shame pouring, poisoned pabulum whisky down 
Lost in a place with hungry whores, ink paying  gigolos 
This night a respected gentleman put's on his evening gown
He sits in front of a mic playing the same old sad song
Fitted out in drag, his wife has no clue
Holy breeders trying to change my shoes
Lingering from the Cute Chinaman, running his tab sky high
Bluebirds of jealousy, set round the vintage Barstool like fools
Minds overpowered and threaten to the very nub

I am drunk-- in his eye, 
He receives a macabre confession of possessiveness 
I am drunk-- in her eye,
She has a sick confession of subconsciousness 

Broken loose from a negative, regressive state of mind
Sit and enjoy this broken bottle of champagne 
Unspoken rage in every empty can left behind
A shot glass drops from my unstable hands longing to hold a pen
I look into a mirror and embrace every meaning of stability
Blotting out the madness behind a metal cage of reality
At times, I feel the need to bring down this masquerade 
A drink so hostile, I can't even remember my image and name 

Too many scars, from the foster of paper and pen
My dependents are drunken demons from a traumatized childhood 
Tonight I will legislate a special thanks
Holding up my cup, until death finds my note 
I will smile, at every Judge and Jury, during karaoke night
Shutting down my eyes, fantasizing everything's gonna be alright
I will not  jilt knowing, writers block haunted my days away
Insecure hoarding monsters enjoying spoil forgotten words
Tonight I thirst like never before, my tongue inscribes around a tin cup
I am not eating up by it, no matter how long I've drowned in it
This is my kind of whisky, my thoughts, my days of ammo 
To tell you the truth, I possess no desire to drink
It's all about the love of poetry and how sober, I become (WITHOUT)
The monsters that reside inside, have one thing to say

"Give me Poetry, or give me Death!"

by: PD
Categories: receives, abuse, addiction, celebration, muse,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Finding God

FINDING GOD

My hungry heart and thirsty soul yearns for refill...
Darkness and light roll then turn me up and down.
Laughter and cries conjure caress my being in shrill.
Gaping aghast to running rush caused a run-down!

Yet, You my God comforted me 'neath water tides try.
In trials and confusion, Your Sovereign a rock still.
To shaky hope and weakness, Your grace empowers my will.
The wilderness brings forth spring when I found yea...

Hearing the sweetness of your voice in silence 
unfolds truth - healing wells of pains and woes...
Heaven's breath by blossoms smell brought no shyness
of searching... finding... knowing You more and more...

Stars and moon shine along with my life's lamp shall bow
in praise and worship, the deepest reverence I can offer.
Thanking you until my life is done, my forever vow.
As finding You, my God within labyrinths sets order...

(c)Olive Eloisa
4:11am
August 10. 2013
FIRST PLACE, GLORY
TO GOD!!!
CONTEST: FINDING GOD
SPONSOR: Gale Angel
Doyle

Inspired by Biblical Verses: 

*Acts 17:27: That they should seek God, in the hope that they might feel their  way toward him and find him. Yet he is actually not far from each one of us,


**Matthew 7:8 = For everyone who asks receives, and the one who seeks finds, and to the one who  knocks it will be opened.

***Jeremiah 33:3 - call to me and I will answer you, and will tell you great and 
hidden things that you have not known.
Categories: receives, bible, faith, god, inspiration,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Truth About Truth -

Truth burns at the center of all occurrance,
it is a heat that motivates appettites to enlarge,
truth is a multiplier of quests, 
satisfaction always arrives at the porch of a new path,
truth does not reveal endings, only beginings that behave
like currents pushing towards a shore,
truth demands stamina from the finder as well from the seeker,
it dashes in delight from the tired,
indolence receives no invitation from truth because laziness is a debtor,
a fish with no gills,
credit walks not from the bank steps of truth,
one must exchange, transact with it, as wanting is to worth,

Truth holds strength in one hand and suffering in the other,
He gives quarter and meal to surviving artificers who are organizing
their talents for future enterprise,
to the brigand and beggar He puts on a pewter plate
bland beans representing distance,
disillusionment preceeds the knowledge of utility because
new truth means fallacy is an ancestor,

an anthropologist is truth, observing your traits,
orbiting the ability of your judgement,
some of Truth's revelations are more expensive than others,
sometimes He will take your Past and grin like a haughty antique dealer,
truth will invest in your Future as a gambler revisits old glory
speaking fresh fortunes in cold ears,

He is an opportunist incessantly offering information for spirit,
without the ignorant truth becomes a vagabond in a vineyard of sweet rust,
the secret of truth is that it is ours
if we wish to be honest with ourselves,
truth is the inheritence of the strong who know how to make it,
oppossed to those waiting for it -

J.A.B.
Categories: receives, sports, future, truth,
Form: Didactic

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry


Premium Member - One Little Peek Into Heaven -

Symbols like a feather
is important and meaningful
for the person who receives them

A white feather
I see a sign from the angels
from your loved ones in heaven

Like the souls of ours, meet on a wonderful day
A lonely feather floats freely,
like Voyager ... a man-made object

Not all meanings are meant to be clear at once
Patiently my friend, what you seek is in your heart
It's a lesson in everything

Angels are not imagination
There is much between heaven and earth
A true soulmate, but some people will never believe

Keep smiling and surely
the sun will shine through tomorrow
No language can express, it's all a part of a bigger plan













02.11.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Copyright © All Rights Reserved

* 3rd place in contest
Categories: receives, angel, symbolism,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Don'T Hate Her

Don't hate her because she's beautiful 
Or envy that she's hot
She is all about appearances
It consumes her every thought

Try to look a little closer
Past the makeup and the hair
Beauty has little value
If a person doesn't care

Looks are her priorities
She doesn't work on what's inside
People tell her she's beautiful 
She gorges on her pride

She's an emotional anorexic
Soul food she refuses to eat
Her behavior reinforced
When people fall at her feet

She craves the admiration
The attention she receives 
Pretty is her curse
In the end it's her disease

She becomes a caricature 
Her illusion to maintain 
Fighting the mirror and time
Over and over again

I appreciate a beautiful woman but the Beauty has to emanate from a much deeper place for me to truly appreciate it. The most beutiful women I have met have become more beautiful with each word they have spoken. We need to stop emphasizing the physical when we raise our children, we will then raise up a generation of truly beautiful people.
Categories: receives, people, social, beautiful, beautiful,
Form: Rhyme

Dutiful Dawn

Dutiful dawn awaits the radiant sun
Clothed in her mantle daubed with streaks of light.
And faithful to the course which life must run,
Receives the baton from retreating night.

Remote yet not alone, for down below
Creation is preparing to rejoice.
Faint silhouettes of trees begin to show,
And birdsong swells to greet her in full voice.

The precious golden orb will soon arise
And dawn prepares to slowly slip away.
A blush of pink expands across the skies;
The sun cuts through at last - a brand new day.

This gift of new beginnings should impart
A sense of awe in every human heart.


'2019 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers' FINAL Placement': sponsored by Mark Toney
submitted on April 1st 2019

 April 2019 Premier 6,Any Form ,Any Theme ,Upto A Max Of 14( F O U R T E E N) Lines Poetry Contest : sponsored by Brian Strand
Categories: receives, appreciation, creation, nature,
Form: Sonnet


Premium Member P D. a He Or a She?

Poet Destroyer, P D
has confided to me
that P D
is indeed
a She,
but then again, P D
may be screwing with me.
We shall see.
So I hope this anwers the question you all keep asking me.
"Is P D a He or is P D a She?"
It truly doesn't really matter to me.
Here on the internet we're all gender free
basically.
A woman I could very well be.
Perhaps I'm the widow of theKidster in reality
or his mother who still loves him very dearly,
still in mourning, unable to let go, keeping alive his memory.
Perhaps his already written poems he left behind I post for all to read
and the comments his work receives brings comfort to me.
Something to think about. Wouldn't you agree?
Categories: receives, introspection,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Belle of the Ball

my new peach dress
so fastidiously pressed
in hope that a man will seek to caress

Strauss’s Blue Danube calls
reverberates through halls
streaming from Michelangelo walls

coy ladies smile 
bright eyes beguile
captivating men’s attention for a while

as gentlemen twirl them
I, a lone femme
feel humbled, an unwanted gem

but wait
a princely man approaches with rapid gait
pounding of my heart will not abate

laughter replaces loneliness this night
he leads me to the floor beneath candlelight
this welcome twist of fate feels so right

liberated, we dance
our prelude to romance
my heart receives another chance

swaying, he inhales my perfume
scent of gardenias in full bloom
with passion, we are both consumed

gaiety undulates in each step we take
if this is a dream, I dare not wake
such precious bliss I could never remake



*Written November 16, 2014
Categories: receives, dance, joy, romance,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member sound of one hand clapping

When we abide in restful quietude,
divine energy gridlines come alive,
held still with vibrancy and fortitude,
causing nectar to drip from soul’s bliss hive.

There is no mystery in words we speak,
being simply devout intent of heart,
wishing to be still to get a sneak peek
at sparks that cause bliss ignition to start.

Though the seeker who seeks does not exist,
heart’s desire emoted needs a response
which it receives, manifest as a mist,
throb of bliss magnetism, held in love’s sconce.

The aspect of us entwined with the whole,
is imbibed in heart as whispers of soul.
Categories: receives, spiritual,
Form: Sonnet

Sonnet Contest -Daybreak

Fair dawn awaits

Once more fair dawn awaits the radiant sun
Clothed in her mantle daubed with streaks of light.
And faithful to the course which life must run;
Receives the baton from retreating night.

Remote yet not alone, for down below
Creation is preparing to rejoice;
Faint silhouettes of trees begin to show,
And birdsong swells to greet her in full voice.

The precious golden orb will soon arise
And dawn prepares to slowly slip away
A blush of pink expands across the skies
The sun cuts through at last: a brand new day.

This gift of new beginnings should impart
A sense of awe in every human heart.
Categories: receives, beautiful, day, inspirational,
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Nature's Advocate

Creatures of feathers, fur and fins
gather ‘round to touch her heart.
Somehow their instincts assure them
she will strive to offer protection.

Wee winged one that fell from its nest
she cradles in loving hands,
feeding and nursing
till it can soar through life on its own.

Abandoned kittens and pups
find a temporary home with her,
until she can place them
with loving souls who nurture. 

Baby dolphin stranded on a beach
receives prompt attention,
when she carries it
to those with healing talents.

Rewards are rightfully reaped
as she hears birds singing,
feels love in a kitten’s purr,
finds joy watching dolphins play.

Each act of kindness is repaid
a hundred times and more.
Leaving gentle impressions of hope,
one life to another..




*February 9, 2017
Categories: receives, animal, nature,
Form: Free verse

Pen Sated


My auspicious Holiday Muse,
it has a hunger pang...
A pen which merrily sings of words,
joyously written in the heart
Honored friends and guests 
invited freely 
to a feast of thoughts

Etiquette tableware articulation
is succulently presented:

Romantic spooning
lovingly receives
a lip passion dipped
extra helping

Fork tongue behavior 
gracefully parse admonished ...
Moist apology napkins passed 
hand-to-hand, are sure to 
both give-and-take receive 
a double blessing portion

Rational wit is the knife
that cuts this well-deserved, 
bountiful ponder platter
Tasteful thoughts are worth
twice returning for

All are consumed by fiery debate:
Enlightened rumination slow roasting
on an elevated, rotating spit

The more flame exposed,
the more tender 
the meat of the conversation get

The hearth of the heart
warmly contemplate 
delectable morsels well reasoned

Toasts of love are ambrosia divine,
as is the 
meditative digestion silence time

Pen sated is about the gut gist of it

Just deserts for everyone, 
I do ink insist
Categories: receives, allusion, appreciation, holiday, perspective,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Let Me

let me ...
you are the All
your need is my pleasure -
your pleasure, my need
i, water to your vessel, rain to your bloom
your fingers are the spaces in mine
your body ... the bread of my desire -
and the altar of my sacrifice
let me fill my hollows ... sip your wine
oh let me ...
you are the One
the reef i break myself upon
and the soft sand beach that receives me
i, your spindrift ...
washed shore-ward by the storm
you are my mercy ...
bind me with your sorrows
let weep, the blood of pain and passion
wrap me in your wings
and let me.





~ 1st Place ~  in the "Strand Choice D, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
Categories: receives, angel, appreciation, body, metaphor,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Their Precious Jewels

where *Sharia reigns
women are precious jewels
hide them from the world
let no other man behold
the diamond that you possess

guard that precious gem
her ovaries will get hurt
if she drives a car
yet Sharia will permit
your woman to be chauffeured

letting jewels drive
could lead to prostitution
yet young gems are mined
and driven to Syria
Al-Queda’s ruby pleasures

dancing in the rain
two Pakistani sisters
shame their family
honor killings rained bullets
on pearls that smile on YouTube

where education
is horribly unbalanced
Jihad goes crazy
a gem shot by fanatics
receives the Nobel Peace Prize


For Richard Lamoureux's Let's Talk About It Poetry Contest

*Sharia (Islam) the body of canonical law based on the Koran that lays down certain duties and penalties for Muslims

a five- tanka series done in traditional syllable count. (Well, I hope at least a few of them are decent tanka!) 
Inspired by and Written 7/17/2015 for the  Patriarchy Contest of Thomas Martin

To see the short dance of the Pakistani girls killed to save family "honor", please click on my link at the top.
Categories: receives, men, power,
Form: Tanka

Premium Member The Mayan Declared

The year is 2025
I have come back to my past
To witness the Mayans
Who said Earth would not last

2012
Was the year they declared
That the planet we knew
Could never be spared

An Asteroid shower
We could never comprehend 
Sends this heaven to hell
In catastrophic spend

The first to hit
Was the daddy of them all
Our axis twisted
The human race in fall

Just of Madagascar
In the Indian Ocean
It's where it all started
That set our demise in motion

Tsunami waves
Like giant tower blocks
Swamped Indonesia
As Polynesia rocked

The force of impact
Reverberated west
On the Canary Islands
A dormant volcano so reft

It's massive mountain side
Into the Atlantic slipped
To the eastern seaboard
Of the United States it shipped

A second Tsunami
Half the world long
Would submerge the east
Taking the weak and the strong

The second to hit
Hit a place struck before
Tunguska in Russia
Receives another sore

Daylight turns to night
As earth meets our skies
Fallout from the reactors
In shattered demise

Radiated clouds
Eventually filter down
Leaving bleeding lacerations
As we humans death drown

Smaller asteroids
Some just a few hundred feet
Around the world they were marvelled
Until they meet their greet

The place where I stand now
Was Yosemite National Park
Now dark ridges of black
So bare and stark

It's been many many years
Since the sun shone through the screen
When I close my eyes I remember
When the earth was lush and green

How many of us survived
Will we ever know
Was this in our destiny
I think all around me, now shows
Categories: receives, angst, death, fantasy, history,
Form: Rhyme
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