Young Girl Receives Advice

Mom: “Beware
guys that smile
all the time!”

Dad: “Avoid
boys that don’t
smile a lot!”

Older sis:
“Girl, you know
they conspire!”


January 27, 2023
written for the Tricube Contest
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:34 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem -
Canerdy Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 4:50 AM
Confusing advice for a teen. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:26 AM
THANK YOU, Sara. Janice
Alex Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Great fun. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 4:46 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj. Janice
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