Best Extremis Poems


Like Daisies On Stalks

Besotted winged pollinators
roistering barrage drowned
amidst general insectivorous cacophony
indistinct auditory signals communicated

intermingled with bounteous wafting fragrance
midwifed edenic floral pullulation
sensate admixture viz colored spectrum
amidst unrehearsed extemporaneous

orchestral suite bedded lambs
amorous ewe man like bleating songs
nature all aflutter actively socially vociferating
profuse living color rainbow pastiche

teeming soundgarden smorgasbord
cornucopia ignites mordent Utopian aural swath
visual vistas stilling spellbinding
spilling riotous carpeted web

uniting doubting Thomas's existentialism
despite unanswered queries
asper diverse modalities each specie evolved
to survive despite countervailing destructive forces

generating plethora pandemonium ironically
promulgating harmonic exemplary convergence
Highland Manor concourse aflame with new life
parented by instinctive imprimatur anonymous patents

now genetic mapping usurped with untold outcome
analysis bred crispr discovery Earthlings fiddling
glorifies honied indemnity Judeo-Christian kudos
leaves of grass kudzo resistance mutation immunizes

biosphere once prolific differentiation shrinks
becoming monocultural setting virtual stage
catastrophe plus food shortage would become
global debacle predicated, sans virulent

viral and/or bacterial strain renting asunder
tripwire unspooling delicate webbed whirl
already widely compromised more so
since Rachel Carson wrote Silent Spring


*****sapiens population explosion
pits profligate predilections planet Earth in extremis
dire crisis cavalierly dismissed humans
in hot pursuit racking up superfluous wealth

dirty deeds done dirt cheap - tricking
mother nature, who will unwittingly
spring scrumptious feeding off scrimmage
forcing capitulation or total extinction

meanwhile fostering long tall floral inflorescence
a composite having sessile flowers
apiary abuzz, cuz queen bee
can no longer wax bereft of royal jelly.
Categories: extremis, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Elegy

Heroes All

On the 70th of VJ Day we salute the Forgotten Service the Red Ensign heroes 

of the longest battle of all, the whole war: the only good war for Freedom's cause.  

When a merchantman got hit, the employers' did a nasty trick, stopping pay on the 

day, one in four of the heroes all died in the forgotten the Mercantile Marine. 

Not just Brits served their time, but others from the watery the globe, of all 

religions and none; some sacked at the end of the War, to go home to wars. 



Let us raise a glass or two to all our Allies too and be thankful that former enemies 

are allies and friends now, and remember Milton who knew a thing or two about 

war: "Peace hath her victories no less than war" yet if we really have to fight that 

we have the people and the ships and allies if we are in extremis. 

                                      Salute the Red Duster All. 



 

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Categories: extremis, war,
Form: Prose Poetry

Ban Assault Weapons In 2017 - Part3

exclamation, which does nothing to stem dead locked high tide   
     proliferation of high-powered assault bazookas 
     manned by berserk cruel death eaters, 
     arch nemesis picks off life with a blip
simultaneously bipedal hominid(s) grip handily rounded dirk 
   as backup in case clip
misses mark, where siege mentality induces 
   nationwide sprinting into lockdown mode deterring by a drip
fiendish homicidal metamorphoses, where transmogrification 
of generic guy wielding weapon subjugating hostages pits malignancy fill lip
mailer daemon hell bent on besieging bait (unaware
Snapchatting linkedin flickr ring beings) burst deadly quip
   barrage of bullets malicious intent to spray 
   killing machines deliver click and rip
paying plenti deathly instagram howls amidst pandemonium, 
   thence funereal slip
epitaphs etched on tombstones proliferate taking souls to Hades trip.
Brutal and nasty nefarious scheme directed at humble lettered folks 
   (like those comprising my home town - 
   once evoked pastoral meme Lake Woebegone) 
   minding their p's and q's, when in extremis
out of the blue nightmare interrupts idyllic dream
a sudden bitta bing bitta bang rings terrorist catcall 
   followed by red tide and river of bloodied body where caskets
rendered veneer of dark wood within lies corpse, 
   pistol whipped, shredded and outkast, where mortician daubs creme.
Soundcloud boom echoes, thus occurs staccato sinister sonic strafes across
   freshly fielded tombstone; pearl jam gray slate, some formerly anonymous 
namesake, which underling, higgs bo son or daughter blitzkrieg cross 
   invisible trajectories shatter (at shutterfly speed), 
   democratic rubric rendered dross
   disposable lives of society with senseless slaughter, whereat somber silence 
   pines nostalgia for Mill on the Floss
when life seemed innocent against gun metal gloss 
wails of agony at another human loss.
Categories: extremis, absence, dark, faith, hate,
Form: Dramatic Verse

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I Cannot Weight To Hmm

I Cannot Weight To Hmm...
Be Pressed By A Dumbbell

Two fifteen pound
     steely danse sing
     wrought iron dumbbells
     ill-tempered, impatiently,
     and intensely a weight
their turn to hmm... press me,
     and forthwith dense trait
heavy handed prestidigitation

     to yours truly, this primate
currently attempting
     to craft sad excuse
     for a poem, sans far fetched
     notion, aye trite re: late
engendering, foisting, and goading
     bizarre lifelike qualities
     to inanimate solid helpmate

to build (and/or oven
     just tone) muscles bitterly, painfully,
     resignedly wince, where washboard
     abdomen long a goner
     impossible to recoup, 
     whar hide didst narrate
ting hours sculpting great
former Adonis build

     on these, now nada so lovely
     bones, and experience 
     spiritual strife to oscillate,
     perhaps witness sing 
     angst to esse skill late
heady feeling healthy vim within
     myself, how just
     with verily at least dedicate

half hour exercise can be great
for body, mind, and
     soul triage, otherwise...
     basic gravitational laws
     of physics gladly
     hand me unwanted fate,
how gradually physique
     will eventually demonstrate

flabby, droopy, and
     unwanted addy post tissue create
ting another reason to berate,
castigate, emasculate, where
     self repudiation will germinate
(albeit, thence in extremis), yours truly
     doth relinquish fitness regime
     resulting sparking, and taste

     testing casus belli dictate
tête-à-tête, viz hasty
     unconditional surrender to
     a void mortal kombat,
     which latter, would exterminate,
the forces of yin and yang,
     re: lee (I rub hurts) loch cur,
     thence finding me fraught,

     (yule hiss see - uselessly)
     grant ting soul 
     option to disintegrate,
in the event emotional civil war,
rents asunder every fiber
     of mine being, which
    wrath wracked wraith self destruction 
     twill woefully satiate.
Categories: extremis, angst, appreciation, dad, endurance,
Form: Free verse

Earth Day April 22nd 2018

an inner conflict dust brew
within this scribe, who offers ye to chew
(like sweet treats metaphorically) thee do
tee incumbent, when Doomsday clock 
     counts down minutes few

according Al Gore rhythm  
     unstoppably ticking, 
     when life gets turned to global goo
tenderized viz Doctor Zeus 

     if not Horton Hears Hoo 
then most definitely The Lorax 
     (couching urgent morals underscored 
     by satellite photographs 

     showing melting icecaps or igloos,
which planetary sos, sans in extremis 
     requires joint effort of Gentile and Jew,
plus every other sectarian credo, 

     dogma, ethos...knew
clear family, and whatnot 
     to become linkedin with Linda Loo
yes, we moost not forget 

     Old McDonald with his moo
moo there bovine creatures 
     agedly hobbling along, or new
lee born, cuz juiced one day 

     per three hundred and sixty five 
     (six with leap year - 
     to appease ghost oh Rachel Carson
     imagine dragons festooned leotard 
     with brand name Oroblu)

or poor ole Whinny The  Pooh
eternally stuck in Rabbit's 
     hole sum Hutch as a queue
doth loosely form dreaming up and rue

mien hating solution 
     (burning the midnight oil) true
lee trying to remedy plight 
     of said bear character,

     perhaps unstated message being woo
king in tandem solutions to resolve 
     wretched condition of world wide web 
     possible by bridging differences 
     between me and you, and you, and you...
Categories: extremis, 12th grade, 5th grade,
Form: Light Verse

Premium Member The Exact Moment

It would be odd 
	but somehow comforting 
	knowing the exact moment 
	when I die 
	yet live on. 
	No, not a resurrection 
	or reincarnation, 
	but rather a destruction 
	of the facades I live behind.
	 
	Do you think what I see 
	in another’s eyes is real? 
	Or In the mirror each morning? 
	Do you believe that what 
	others see of me is the truth? 
	The answers are always “no.” 
	I am made of reference to myself. 
	I keep my true self from myself, 
	not even knowing who I am 
	until I am “in extremis,” 
	when I act without regard or filter, 
	when hard pain 
	or the pain of others 
	or death 
	or birth 
	or joy 
	or deep love 
	or touching God, 
	as did St. Joan inside the fire,
	strips away vestiges of my last defenses. 
	
	I think about this: 
	To have a film, 
	made by some cosmic cinematographer, 
	capturing the instant
	of subtraction of all my masks, 
	to be able to relive the moment 
	they are stripped from me, 
	to see the eyes that see me,
	to see me, 
	to see it happen, 
	to know when it’s done.
Categories: extremis, philosophy,
Form: Free verse


On Dinner and Hearing the News

On Dinner and hearing the news
Your soft touch, elbow to elbow, not withdrawn, steady;
An unnecessary head on shoulder in lament.
Casual glances, a quiet acceptance of the gift of food
The next night.

The inner tremor of excitement, that suppressed desire 
Might be shared and returned in kind.
A hesitant embrace and parting kiss, no certainty,
No casual expectation.

And then doubt, insidious doubt, the intrusion of reality;
Followed by the sadness of self knowledge and 
The inexorable truth of physical age, with the foolishness 
Of mental self deception.

And then the starkness of life in its rawness and agony;
Life on an Indian street, whole family
Less those daughters sold or married as children
Into what despair and baseness?

Death, casual passing in extremis, just blood and bones,
To be collected and given rudimentary burial, to pass
Into history and be lost, unlamented, unremembered
A brief candle in the darkness.

What if we spoke our thoughts with no heed of consequence?
Would then a simple yes or no suffice, with no judgment,
Or unfeeling criticism or labelling as an unwelcomed intrusion.
An acceptance of true feeling?

Is our caution and anxious avoidance of exposure to others,
No more than an affection of superior sensibility?
Are we not, in truth, no more than a Calcutta family,
Contained within a few square metres of open pavement?
Categories: extremis, death, social,
Form: Verse

To Evil

To Evil
You're apposite to Bad
Though abstract you are
We've seen your vivid actions
Through your acolytes
Your opposite, the Good.
Your rivalries long run forever
That one day -you will submit
To Godness- is not in your dictionary.
Your cohorts, men.
The way they succumb to you
Is not well known.
Some say it is destiny some say
They allowed you in.
Your utmost harm, death.
This you inflict on your enemies
And suprisingly even to your obedient goons
Have you ever thought of your coming death?
I don't know
But if not for your existence
Good will not be learnt.
Heros and heroines wouldn't have been known
Even the Saviour would have stayed up unknown
But for sincerity
Your bad exceeds your good
And still indestructible you think you are.
Your enemies, the inflictee.
Has always surpassed you with
Their beliefs by their sides.
Your devices, The inflictors.
Has always enjoyed doing business with you
But not for long they realise.
Most of them you betray using death
But few you lose to repentancy.
List, i will not, all your inflictions
On the world premier of which 
Is Hatred.
People unknowingly wish
To see in extremis
To see you burn forever in inferno
There fore Evil, Evil i beseech you
Come not to me on what i have ecrit
Not to, not to me, i reject you
Please Begone!!!
Categories: extremis, faith,
Form: Free verse

Tree

1. Firm and old, aging forever.

2. Touching the hard surface
It blooms with the little things 
Seeing my face, smiling as I do it 
It’s small, simple, and working.

3. Roots are strong and tight
It binds everything together 
Spreading far and wide
To the cores of the Earth.

4. Look at the tree’s bark, so jagged and uncertain.
Like a maze for ants.

5. Feel the bark, where the heart is 
It’s the pulse of a sad tree 
Knowing, Remembering,
and Soon in extremis.
Categories: extremis, nature,
Form: Other

Earth Day April 22nd 2024

Earth Day April 22nd 2024

I lament bidding Gaia's creatures adieu,
an inner conflict dust brew
within this scribe, who offers ye to chew
(like sweet treats metaphorically) thee do
tee incumbent, when Doomsday clock
counts down minutes few
according Al Gore rhythm
unstoppably ticking,
when life gets turned to global goo
tenderized viz Doctor Zeus
if not Horton Hears Hoo

then most definitely The Lorax
(couching urgent morals underscored
by satellite photographs
showing melting ice caps or igloo,
which planetary sos, sans in extremis
requires joint effort of Gentile and Jew,
plus every other sectarian credo,
dogma, ethos...knew
clear family, and whatnot
to become linkedin with Linda Loo

yes, we moost not forget
Old McDonald's with his moo
moo there bovine creatures
agedly hobbling along, or new
lee born, cuz juiced one day
per three hundred and sixty five
(six with leap year -
imagine dragons festooned leotard
with brand name Oroblu
or poor ole Winnie The Pooh

eternally stuck in Rabbit's
hole sum Hutch as a queue
doth loosely form dreaming up and rue
men ate about the old woman 
who lived in a shoe
mien hating solution
(burning the midnight oil) true
lee trying to remedy plight
of said bear character,
hemmed in courtesy 

*****sapiens population explosion 
whereat their den only 
allows, enables, and provides 
cubby hole view
perhaps unstated message being woo
king in tandem solutions to resolve
wretched condition of world wide web
possible by bridging differences
between me and you, and you, and you...
essentially everyone 
comprising the human zoo.
Categories: extremis, 12th grade, america, appreciation,
Form: Rhyme
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