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Belshazzar had a feast
before seeing the writing on the wall,
Quickly,falling,from the greatest to the least,
for dead-men,don't walk tall-
When lives are on God's scale
Only the just* ,live to tell the tale.

*justified  This sestet inspired by Daniel 5
Form: Verse

Babylon

The earth of five million was of one speech,
Build it up, higher and higher, undie,
Towers of dub man,
circumvent his plan,
Suddenly behold the man, throw it down,
Speak of Babel, people uncomfortable,
Confound and confuse, scatter, no matter,
Shem, Arphaxad, Salah and Eber, a river,
Suddenly Nebuchadnezzar, tongue teach,
The king of dreams, wise men taught to lie each,
'I know of certainty that ye would gain this time,
And you and me did drink Babylon's fine wine,
Shadrach,
Meshach and Abednego burn,
It's not your turn,
It's not your turn, unlearn,
Eat grass, lift thine eyes, dominion, you earned,
People's nations, languages and value gauges,
O Belshazzar, Mine, Tekel and Peres, hand write,
Written to see sooth to say, another day,
Oh Babylonites, there is no hope for you,
That they in their wisdom, worship devils,
Babylon the great,Mother of harlots nine,
You think divine, you think divine, you lying,
The smoke of her burning, truth unlearning,
The great Babylon come,
The whore sittetch down.
I am Alpha and Omega, beginning and end,
Babylon was cast down,
Every face a frown,
A New heaven and new earth, no hunger and thirst,
He reigns now for ever,
Babylon has gone.
And with it the words of the Wizard London.

Belshazzar - the Doomsayer's Dirge

I feel Disturbed
with the callous call to arms
for vested gains
and rhetorical rants of raving men
ostentatiously out to save your souls
having pledged theirs to Lucifier's lien.

I see the city ablaze
with dreams of the denizens on the street
as they mindlessly move
to put their minds in front of soulless screens
churning out code for what they know not.

I wish I would, I wish I could
shout at the ostriches all around
who hear the screams and shut them out
pretending they do not exist.

What God's of Darkness
do we pray to
at temples of modern doom?

The Simon and Garfunkelian tune
finds vent as a doomsayer's dirge.

And I am suitably disturbed.

~11 May 2016~


Contest Judged:  5/14/2016 6:42:00 AM




Lyrics cliché image - Poetry Contest  - sponsored bt Silent One

1. Lyric - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9Dg-g7t2l4
Disturbed - sound of silence.  (an amazing version)

2. Cliche - The Writing on the Wall

3. Picture #5

Placed 2nd


Eat, Drink and Be Merry the Night Belshazzar Died

The Night Belshazzar Died…


The night when Belshazzar seen
God’s writing on the wall,
He did not know that soon
Babylon would FALL.

This king who thought he was so 
“awesome and great.”
Didn’t know that death soon
would be his fate.

“Eat, drink and be merry”
was the motto of the day.
But God had something
else to say!

The days of endulging themselves
in wickedness and sin,
Was soon to be destroyed
by their enemies within.

This life which for long
you have enjoyed,
Shall one day perish
and be destroyed.

Allow the “writing of God”
to reach your heart’s door.
It is for you that Jesus died for!

Don’t allow the enemy
to destroy your soul.
For Jesus loves you more
than you’ll ever know!


By Jim Pemberton
2008
Form: Rhyme

God's Writing On the Wall

There was a city of Babylon whom
King Belshazzar ruled...
Till that one night, when he became “fooled.”

“Eat drink and be merry.”
Was the motto of the day!
But God had something else, he wanted to say! 

The finger of God reached down
And wrote on the wall!
The prophet of God told the king, 
his kingdom would fall!

The king panicked and later that night…
His kingdom fell…  Without a fight! 

May this be a lesson and a warning to us today!
We need to listen to God!
And what he has to say! 

Our country may “enjoy”  it’s wickedness and sin!
But one day soon!  It will
be coming to an end!

Won’t you allow the writing of God,
to touch your heart’s door?
It was for me and you, that our savior died for!

God loves you more, than you’ll ever know!
He came to earth to redeem your soul!

By Jim Pemberton
Form: Rhyme

The Writing On the Wall

It was a night of celebrations,
The king of Babylon held a great feast;
A thousand nobles were in attendance
At his opulent palace in the East.
The wine was flowing freely,
Under its influence the king decreed
That Israel's gold and silver vessels,
(Stolen by his father's greed)
Be brought for all to drink and praise
Their gods of gold and silver and stone.
A night of debauchery was in motion
But, such sacrilege God couldn't condone.
Suddenly, the fingers of a man's hand
Appeared and began writing on the wall,
Writing a divine message of retribution,
Signalling Babylon's sudden fall.
Belshazzar's face became pale
From the fear that gripped his soul,
Even his knees were knocking,
His body looked like losing control.
The king called out loudly
Summoning astrologers to the room,
Seeking to solve the mystery
Of those words spelling out his doom.
But, they couldn't clearly explain
Or make sense of what they saw
Until Daniel, a man of God was allowed
To give interpretation, true, and sure.
A message of doom it was as
That very night Belshazzar was killed,
And from her zenith, Babylon fell,
Because it was all as God willed.
Armed forces stormed the city
Just as a prophecy centuries ago
Said Cyrus the Mede would conquer -
An Empire he would overthrow.
We all will do well to take note
Of those events that occurred that night
And be careful not to be so proud
That all sense would quickly take flight.
Remember, the Most High over the Earth
Can remove anyone who has the gall
To challenge his rightful authority -
Remember, the writing on the wall!
Form: Rhyme


The Night Belshazzar Died

The night when Belshazzar seen
God’s writing on the wall,
He did not know that soon
Babylon would FALL.

This king who thought he was so 
“awesome and great.”
Didn’t know that death soon
would be his fate.

“Eat, drink and be merry”
was the motto of the day.
But God had something
else to say!

The days of endulging themselves
in wickedness and sin,
Was soon to be destroyed
by their enemies within.

This life which for long
you have enjoyed,
Shall one day perish
and be destroyed.

Allow the “writing of God”
to reach your heart’s door.
It is for you that Jesus died for!

Don’t allow the enemy
to destroy your soul.
For Jesus loves you more
than you’ll ever know!

By Jim Pemberton
11/07/07
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Belshazzar Sestet

Belshazzar had a feast
before seeing the writing on the wall,
Quickly,falling,from the greatest to the least,
for dead-men,don't walk tall-
When lives are on God's scale
Only the just,live to tell the tale.

 This sestet inspired by Daniel 5
 | Year Posted 2010
Form: Rhyme

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