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Premium Member Moonscaping: Riding the Tail of a Comet

My friends and I are having a social gathering up in the Universe

It's a half moon

I ponder; Is the moon half full or half empty?

We notice to our suprise and amazement the tail of a comet

It's hues of glittered dust are pink, green, blue, and silver

It has red cushions on it for everone to sit

We hop on one by one and squat meditational style

And we ride the tail of the comet

As we explore the immense Universe

It's brilliant trailing blazes of glory

Star candles flicker

We ride quicker and quicker

Much like life it goes out like a flicker

We land again on the moon which is half full

No need for a wic and a bic up on the full moon

By Susan J. Mills

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