Moonscaping: Riding the Tail of a Comet
My friends and I are having a social gathering up in the Universe
It's a half moon
I ponder; Is the moon half full or half empty?
We notice to our suprise and amazement the tail of a comet
It's hues of glittered dust are pink, green, blue, and silver
It has red cushions on it for everone to sit
We hop on one by one and squat meditational style
And we ride the tail of the comet
As we explore the immense Universe
It's brilliant trailing blazes of glory
Star candles flicker
We ride quicker and quicker
Much like life it goes out like a flicker
We land again on the moon which is half full
No need for a wic and a bic up on the full moon
By Susan J. Mills
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