Zzzzz

For you who fund our pain and grief Zzzzz is sleep For us Zzzzzz is certain death we are bombed because you sleep The silence a massacre unfolding Zionists rejoicing

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/29/2024 6:07:00 AM

Such a powerful write Aysha, belated congrats on POTD, hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/27/2024 6:29:00 AM

Clever! Congratulations on POTD!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/27/2024 6:20:00 AM

Back with congratulations and virtual hugs xomo

Martin Challender

Date: 9/27/2024 1:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. The world desperately needs peace. Netenyahu does not want it. Innocent people continue to suffer. Best wishes.

Aurore Severo

Date: 9/27/2024 12:59:00 AM

Congrats, well deserved, the world seems blind.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2024 9:47:00 PM

A heartfelt piece you have expressed here Aysha... Congratulations on receiving POTD...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/26/2024 11:21:00 AM

Hello Aysha Nuwas, Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your special day. /Darlene/

Robert Gorelick

Date: 9/26/2024 10:42:00 AM

Clever line as we zzz, particularly the agony of the innocent children, I'm troubled by the cauldron of hatred in the Middle East. Netanyahu values only his political survival it seems. Congratulations on POTD! My best, Robert

Joseph May

Date: 9/26/2024 9:11:00 AM

A poignant and powerful write, Congrats on POTD

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/26/2024 6:49:00 AM

A powerful poem! Congratulations on your POTD.

John Lawless

Date: 9/26/2024 6:45:00 AM

there has been way to much "rejoicing" on the part of all concerned.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/26/2024 5:29:00 AM

Dear Aysha, I am back to congratulate you on your POTD. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Karen Jones

Date: 9/26/2024 4:28:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning potd Aysha!

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2024 2:20:00 AM

Congratulations Aysha on your POTD. Indeed the world has gone mad destroying the planet - in different parts of the world - As Daniel below said we need world Peace. Think how much good can be got by using the funds for the needy, no matter where. -Maria

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/26/2024 1:36:00 AM

the bitter truth - congratulations on POTD, Aysha

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/24/2024 8:44:00 AM

Potent powerful and profound, and too sadly too true; you have written a mighty little poem. A fave for me I hope everyone reads this. xomo

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/24/2024 8:43:00 AM

Pleasure reading ~ delightful write

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/24/2024 5:25:00 AM

Dear Aysha, very powerful and more was said in the spaces between your words which made it more impactful to me. Peace, we need to be a world of Peace. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel