Zydeco House Party

The bayou sky flies a catfish moon over swamp gators 
And cottonmouth vipers. Accordions, fiddles, and rub board vests 
Make their ramble through the undergrowth hot on the trail
Of a sultry midsummer house party in Sweat Neck, Louisiana.
All the usual suspects are there. Sharkskin Slim doffs his topper
To Ruby and Rose - the Harlequin Twins. They curtsy in reply.
They came to town to show local folks how business gets done.
Fast Man is fresh from stabbing Satan in the back; same as before.
Snorkel-nose Nelson lays his blackjack on the table.
Pelican-neck LeBeau considers the odds and spits.
A honeysuckle breeze wafts across the terrace. 
Eucalyptus, peppermint, and pine tar grace the veranda 
Where Miss Bunny Bouche, in her famous lavender velour, 
Garners attention from spy boys eying Cajun temptations 
With considerably hardened intentions. Several teamsters 
Just in from Shreveport dance lively while a claw hammer fiddler 
Plays Tee Nah Nah. Essential words are suggested in the space 
Between the jug and the mason jar. They speak of collard green 
Creole rice served with crayfish in roux étouffée. The snap beans 
Are sure enough salted. The shrimp gumbo is suitably spiced.
Sad Hannah sits off in the corner, her motives transparent 
As parish politics. She’s been rumored to have dabbled 
In arson crafts she’d learned at Magdalena’s Den of Sin,
But no one ever really pays her much mind.
She’s been deliberating the consequence of a life not lived,
And sees a glimmer of hope in the eye of a hurricane lamp.
Her chance of escaping obscurity erupts through the hall.
So now, it’s last call and damn it all, take a left at the crossroads, 
And be sure to turn your mattress over when it’s time to climb downstairs. 
And as for Hannah, sad Hannah, well, it’s either up Ladder Lane 
Then down Hemp Alley, or else it’s just a lonely walk home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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