Zumbada

A Flamenca dancer's loose blouse Caught the eye of a little mouse When it jumped inside She bloody-near died What flopped out just brought down the house!

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/13/2020 4:32:00 PM

Another terrific Limerick to visualize is better than a picture. Thank you for the laughter Rico. xxoo

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/14/2020 1:08:00 PM

Not always better, but certainly more personal! Wouldn't it be interesting to know what readers visulalised as flopping out? Aloha! Rico

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/12/2020 10:52:00 PM

She learned some new steps. Very entertaining.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/16/2020 2:23:00 PM

We all did! Aloha! Rico

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/12/2020 2:31:00 PM

Hello Rico leffanta, thank you for the laughter. i feel sorry for the dancer. Enjoy your day my friend.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/16/2020 2:23:00 PM

The Pet Industry encourages people to love mice as much as any other pet. Aloha! Rico

Julia A Keirns

Date: 6/12/2020 1:41:00 PM

Ha Ha! Love it.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/16/2020 2:24:00 PM

Mahalo, Julia! Aloha! Rico

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/12/2020 1:24:00 PM

guess that peek caused quite an eek! another gem, rico...

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/16/2020 2:24:00 PM

or two! Aloha! Rico