Zumbada

A Flamenca dancer's loose blouse
Caught the eye of a little mouse
When it jumped inside
She bloody-near died
What flopped out just brought down the house!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Another terrific Limerick to visualize is better than a picture. Thank you for the laughter Rico. xxoo
Leffanta Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 1:08 PM
Not always better, but certainly more personal! Wouldn't it be interesting to know what readers visulalised as flopping out? Aloha! Rico
Buehler Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 10:52 PM
She learned some new steps. Very entertaining.
Leffanta Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:23 PM
We all did! Aloha! Rico
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Hello Rico leffanta, thank you for the laughter. i feel sorry for the dancer. Enjoy your day my friend.
Leffanta Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:23 PM
The Pet Industry encourages people to love mice as much as any other pet. Aloha! Rico
A Keirns Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Ha Ha! Love it.
Leffanta Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:24 PM
Mahalo, Julia! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 1:24 PM
guess that peek caused quite an eek! another gem, rico...
Leffanta Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:24 PM
or two! Aloha! Rico
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