Zounds Losing Twenty Pounds

My frustration with my weight abounds.
I am trying to lose twenty pounds.
I want to do it here
during this brand new year.
I know all of you have heard these sounds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 3:14 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Great work..Yes, I have heard that statement many times..Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 11:29 PM
yep, hear them all the time, Robert. That is my dream too, to lose 20 pounds. I would be TIP TOP form if I could!!! (but I'll settle for even five or ten!!!) Congrats on the win.
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January 15, 2013 at 10:41 AM
Very nice Limerick here Robert.Congrats on the win.
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January 15, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Good morning Robert, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd
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January 15, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations Robert. xx
Bauer Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 5:51 AM
nice one! congrats on placing in the contest!
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 4:45 PM
I, too, want the same thing to happen but I know what it takes..Great job with your Limerick..Thanks for stopping by..I will tell Doris that you sent your sympathy..Sara
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