Zorro's Sorrow 4 Sweetheart

Zorro of the sorrow small, kissed a lady in the hall, coming back still feeling bliss, caught the same girl, was a miss, not Carmelita at all. thinking she was, Carmelita in the dark, kissed her mouth, hands did wander way on south, had a pistol nothing neater. panting sweet was Carmelita, fire burning in her heater, enraptured plunging, something sweeter stayed until the time had come. spent the Zorro's, brow did furrow, coming to the candle light, Where was the sweetest Carmelita, some old shiela smiling bright? Zorro said "oh good to meet ya," bounding on black Diablo, in flight!
Don Johnson 14-aug-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/15/2011 1:28:00 AM
great ballad Don.(deep) How are you? Me i'm just stopping by to say hi and catch up on some of my reading. Love the meaning one can give another when it comes to reading poetry. Have yourself a wonderful evening. God bless & take care,..Linda
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Date: 8/15/2011 2:03:00 AM
I'm very well no medication, so far:) We try to entertain our fellows, not too lively not too mellow, nice to see you, hello, johnson's pulled his sign down mate :)
Date: 8/13/2011 11:27:00 PM
Señor Fox, It's so easy to get in trouble that way. Fly away; live to love another day. Fun poem.
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:25:00 PM
I like this rhyme, its a good one Don
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