Debbie Guzzi Poet Limerick

Zorro's Revenge

There once was a naïve Southern lassie
who believed some politicians classy.
She swallowed all of their guff
like an Emp'ror in the buff.
and soon found out there was NO guarantee.

She soon hired a civil rights GO team
who championed not one of the fine cream
They got lots of work
for ladies named Dirk,
but that was not what she wanted it seems? 


*10a/10a/7b/7b/10a  *10a/10a/5b/5b/10a
A Liberals take on Carolyn Devonshires Limerick "Unmasked"

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Rinki Nandy August 23, 2010 at 3:48 PM Thanks for sharing with us this witty n intelligent write describing the present universal situation of corruption n disappointment...one man's loss is another man's gain...it is so true! n thanks for your gracious comment on life, it's hard to say if i meant "live" or "leave"? although i pacify myself by not stressing on the letter "i" of the word "live"...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 18, 2010 at 2:18 PM OH TEACH I never eat pasta..just cook it..haha.. I am a VEGAN ..remember? luv.. bikini figure in tact..luv.. pupil... see my rehabilitated poem entry..

Carolyn Devonshire August 18, 2010 at 10:13 AM Just received your note and removed some "ands" from my poem. Thanks, Deborah

Carolyn Devonshire August 18, 2010 at 10:09 AM Soup mail in a second, Deborah.

Ravindra K Kapoor August 16, 2010 at 8:18 AM A nice witty tale telling the general psycho of politicians which appears to be a universal problem. Great and beautiful write my friend. Good wishes for the contest. Love and best wishes.......Deb. Guzzi

Sara Kendrick August 15, 2010 at 6:14 AM Good luck in the contest..Interesting thoughts penned.Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta August 14, 2010 at 5:53 PM A nice tale of a naive Southern lassie, Deborah. Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2010 at 1:42 PM Great piece of truth TEACH.. good luck in the contest... politics better left to the politicians ..only causes dissension.. and they can't seem to fix a thing at this point.. enjoyed.. my sentiments.. make luv..not war.. amen.. pupil..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire August 14, 2010 at 1:22 PM No offense taken. Had a great laugh! I like this one a lot. By the way, I'm a lifelong Democrat -- just disenchanted with the current group in D.C. Sort of middle of the road, really, voting for candidates, not parties. This is really funny, Deborah. Sorry for the confusion -- only John has the entries now. He hasn't sent them to me yet. Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock August 14, 2010 at 11:34 AM Good luck in Carolyn's contest. God Bless Phyl