Zoom

Have a Bullmastiff named Zoom, When he farts you leave the room Chewed toy- poop has red in it It’s yuk when you tread in it We have great need for perfume

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/15/2023 1:12:00 PM

Hi Merv - great one. Poor Zoom, poor you! Congrats on your win! :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/16/2023 7:35:00 PM

I can't wait to read it my poet friend! Write with confidence! :)

Merv Hold
Date: 7/15/2023 8:32:00 PM

Thank you Linda, These Limericks are fun. I am going to try one all by myself with no help .. Watch out for it.. Cheers dear lady.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2023 10:57:00 PM

I really like your wit here. Congrats

Merv Hold
Date: 7/11/2023 7:56:00 PM

Dear Andrea, thats so nice of you to comment, Thank you my dear.

Terry Flood

Date: 7/6/2023 4:04:00 PM

Been there, done that… we should start a club. Congrats on your win, Merv. Terry

Merv Hold
Date: 7/11/2023 8:00:00 PM

Hey Terry, someone once asked me, why they made a breed that chews everything its given, farts methane gas and dribbles worse that a basket ball player and expect people to love it. I told em to go buy a horse. Thanks for your comment mate.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2023 4:38:00 PM

oh doggy farts are the worst Merv lol. Thanks so much for supporting the contest and many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Merv Hold
Date: 7/11/2023 8:03:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I really appreciate you commenting on my poems love, I feel a little alone here when I think no one likes them. I'm hardly a poet, but its fun to try. Some of these contests are fun.

David Fisher

Date: 6/28/2023 5:36:00 PM

Good one!

Merv Hold
Date: 7/11/2023 8:04:00 PM

Thanks David. Appreciate your commenting.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/28/2023 2:33:00 PM

Nice one Merv.

Merv Hold
Date: 7/11/2023 8:04:00 PM

Thanks Speaks. Appreciate your commenting.