Zoo Zebra

The zoo zebra had zero zest for his zombie like zoo life But, was very zealous to zone out and count his zany stripes Appearing to be very Zen to visitors passing by At his zenith, he would zoom free upon the plains Now he just zigzags around his tiny pen Looking for zucchini snacks the zookeeper left for him

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Gail Debole

Date: 3/17/2020 7:11:00 PM

Hi Warren, This is definitely a tongue twister that rivals " Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers." I think kids would really enjoy this one. - Gail

Warren Doll
Date: 5/18/2020 9:21:00 AM

Hi Gail. thanks so much for your visit and comments.~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2018 3:39:00 PM

fabulous alliteration Warren I think it most challenging to use the letter Z!:-) My maiden name began with Z - I was so glad to go to the top of the alphabet when I married lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 10/10/2018 11:26:00 AM

Jan, thanks so much for your kind comments. Great move-going from Z to A. :) Warmest wishes coming your way. ~Warren

Barbara Aquila

Date: 7/11/2018 9:48:00 PM

This is adorable. Very Seuss like. I love it.

Warren Doll
Date: 7/12/2018 8:19:00 AM

Hi Barbara, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/1/2018 10:19:00 AM

I hope your Zoo Zebra finds his freedom, WD a cute alliteration !!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/1/2018 10:57:00 AM

Happy Tuesday. Mike. Thanks for the positive comments. Yes, I hope he finds his freedom too. :)