Zoo Safari

take a good look, your car’s in pieces - worth admission? Written by Lee Ramage for Contest "Natural and Beyond" Placement 7th

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John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2011 10:02:00 PM

Lee, a belated congratulations on your certainly worthy place win. I have been so busy renovating my old home, I just haven't had time to do much commenting. Sorry. Agape, Moses

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/30/2011 10:58:00 PM

Oh, I completely understand, we are replacing our front deck and side door steps... should have done one or the other first :( Hope your renovations go well and thanks for taking the time to send your comments. Much appreciated. Lee

Kash Poet

Date: 8/29/2011 10:16:00 PM

An exceptional approach here Lee...congratulations!Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages.

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/29/2011 10:54:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2011 9:02:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John,Lee

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/29/2011 10:51:00 PM

thank you very much. Lee

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2011 6:46:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/29/2011 6:50:00 PM

thank you. Take care Lee

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2011 3:26:00 PM

LOL Love your humorous approach and my car really did get scratched up one time during one of those "drive-through" zoos, Lee. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/29/2011 3:43:00 PM

You know I probably should have been more serious but I saw the baboon and remember how my Dad's car was ripped apart, every piece of metal was removed... couldn't resist. Thanks for the kind words. Love Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2011 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/29/2011 9:18:00 AM

Thanks Carol. Hope you had a nice and safe weekend. Lovely to hear from you. Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2011 11:52:00 PM

Congrats Lee on an exciting win with this poignant piece for contest theme ..luv.. fantastic words...

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/28/2011 11:57:00 PM

Thanks so much. Lee

Constance La France

Date: 8/28/2011 5:34:00 PM

Very cute, Lee, I am sending you a soupymail~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2011 1:45:00 AM

hahaha. I had one of those safaris in Spain! Lucikly nothing happened to the tour bus.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2011 12:43:00 AM

wow! was it worth admission, is the question... lol.. truly enjoyed,..p.d.

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/28/2011 1:06:00 AM

Thanks, ever been to those places where the baboons pull all the metal off your cars as you drive through... African Lion Safari... it was great. Lee