Zoo Safari

take a good look,
your car’s in pieces
- worth admission?


Written by Lee Ramage
for Contest "Natural and Beyond"
Placement 7th

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John Freeman

August 30, 2011 at 10:02 PM

Lee, a belated congratulations on your certainly worthy place win. I have been so busy renovating my old home, I just haven't had time to do much commenting. Sorry. Agape, Moses

Lee Ramage

August 30, 2011 at 10:58 PM

Oh, I completely understand, we are replacing our front deck and side door steps... should have done one or the other first :( Hope your renovations go well and thanks for taking the time to send your comments. Much appreciated. Lee

Kash Poet

August 29, 2011 at 10:16 PM

An exceptional approach here Lee...congratulations!Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages.

Lee Ramage

August 29, 2011 at 10:54 PM

Thank you for your kind words. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 29, 2011 at 9:02 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John,Lee

Lee Ramage

August 29, 2011 at 10:51 PM

thank you very much. Lee

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2011 at 6:46 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Lee Ramage

August 29, 2011 at 6:50 PM

thank you. Take care Lee

Carolyn Devonshire

August 29, 2011 at 3:26 PM

LOL Love your humorous approach and my car really did get scratched up one time during one of those "drive-through" zoos, Lee. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Lee Ramage

August 29, 2011 at 3:43 PM

You know I probably should have been more serious but I saw the baboon and remember how my Dad's car was ripped apart, every piece of metal was removed... couldn't resist. Thanks for the kind words. Love Lee