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take a good look, your car’s in pieces - worth admission?
Written by Lee Ramage for Contest "Natural and Beyond" Placement 7th

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Date: 8/30/2011 10:02:00 PM
Lee, a belated congratulations on your certainly worthy place win. I have been so busy renovating my old home, I just haven't had time to do much commenting. Sorry. Agape, Moses
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/30/2011 10:58:00 PM
Oh, I completely understand, we are replacing our front deck and side door steps... should have done one or the other first :( Hope your renovations go well and thanks for taking the time to send your comments. Much appreciated. Lee
Date: 8/29/2011 10:16:00 PM
An exceptional approach here Lee...congratulations!Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages.
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:54:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Lee
Date: 8/29/2011 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John,Lee
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/29/2011 10:51:00 PM
thank you very much. Lee
Date: 8/29/2011 6:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/29/2011 6:50:00 PM
thank you. Take care Lee
Date: 8/29/2011 3:26:00 PM
LOL Love your humorous approach and my car really did get scratched up one time during one of those "drive-through" zoos, Lee. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2011 3:43:00 PM
You know I probably should have been more serious but I saw the baboon and remember how my Dad's car was ripped apart, every piece of metal was removed... couldn't resist. Thanks for the kind words. Love Lee
Date: 8/29/2011 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Lee. Love, Carol
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/29/2011 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Carol. Hope you had a nice and safe weekend. Lovely to hear from you. Lee
Date: 8/28/2011 11:52:00 PM
Congrats Lee on an exciting win with this poignant piece for contest theme ..luv.. fantastic words...
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/28/2011 11:57:00 PM
Thanks so much. Lee
Date: 8/28/2011 5:34:00 PM
Very cute, Lee, I am sending you a soupymail~~
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Date: 8/28/2011 1:45:00 AM
hahaha. I had one of those safaris in Spain! Lucikly nothing happened to the tour bus.
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:43:00 AM
wow! was it worth admission, is the question... lol.. truly enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/28/2011 1:06:00 AM
Thanks, ever been to those places where the baboons pull all the metal off your cars as you drive through... African Lion Safari... it was great. Lee