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ZOO MANIA

I Took my son on a trip to the zoo There was so much for us to see and do One roar from the lion My son started crying The trip was over I was scared to FOR ZANY ZOO CONTEST

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Date: 5/20/2010 4:22:00 PM
Hello Faly call me when you can!
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:35:00 PM
Loved it!
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Date: 5/13/2010 1:14:00 PM
"One roar from... has the imagery of the poem, while "started crying suggests maybe the door is open for all the places to discover with your son. Very nice. Thx. Jan
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Date: 5/12/2010 4:15:00 AM
Good one! Congratulations on your success in the Linda-Marie’s “Zaney Zoo” contest with this fun limerick. Your creative humor soars with amusement! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! (Even though, true for many!) Laughingly with Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/10/2010 10:36:00 AM
Hey Faleshia, Congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice Limerick...and thnx for leaving your comments on my writes...hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 5/9/2010 9:39:00 PM
Thanks for reminding me of those roars that I heard when I took my kids to the zoo. I was scared too! Congrats on the win! Dan C.
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Date: 5/9/2010 7:22:00 AM
Awe, sweet delightful Limerick Faleshia. Lions, and other big animals can be quite intimidating on young children. Congratulations in the contest >> James
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Date: 5/9/2010 4:19:00 AM
Well written Limerick, Faleshia! And of course congrats to your win in the contest! A lion's roaring can for sure frighten children! Thank you for your comments and hope you have a nice Sunday...Gert
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Date: 5/8/2010 6:18:00 PM
good one Faleshia, I guess no more trips to the zoo for a long time. congratulations on your success in the contest....Margaret
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Date: 5/8/2010 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Limerick. Caryl
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Date: 5/8/2010 6:04:00 PM
very cute, enjoyed reading, I had an experience like that with a Jaguar, that thing screamed and my hair stood straight up, I did not like the way he looked at me.
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:59:00 PM
You have me chuckling. Congratulation on placing second in the contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:24:00 PM
made me laugh, Faleshia.. Good one --congrats to you!-Robert
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:18:00 PM
Very nice win, Faleshia. Congratulations. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/8/2010 1:33:00 PM
Congrats Faleshia on your 2nd place with with Abe in my ZANY ZOO contest.. with this fun poem ..bringing back memories of my four sons at the zoo... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/8/2010 12:15:00 AM
ha ha. now that is a funny story. i wouldn't blame you! this is for sure a win. excellent limerick.lolll -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/7/2010 6:59:00 PM
sometimes grreat plans come crashing down..... great write! best of luck in the contest.......
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Date: 5/7/2010 3:03:00 PM
LOL AT LEAST YOU ADMITTED IT, ENJOYED AND GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST
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Date: 5/7/2010 2:01:00 PM
Cute, I enjoyed the read. A great experience to recall. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 5/7/2010 12:59:00 PM
A lions roar practised for milleniums - how can it can't fail !!
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Date: 5/7/2010 10:30:00 AM
Great Limerick Faleshia....Good Luck....Larry
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Date: 5/7/2010 9:34:00 AM
Wow! Faleshia, this is a very cool Limerick, i' d be scared to, Good luck in the contest,..p.d
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:23:00 AM
The zoo CAN be a scary place, Faleshia. Next time maybe you should take your son to see the sea otters or birds. Enjoyed your limerick! Love, Carolyn
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