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Zoo Mania

I Took my son on a trip to the zoo
There was so much for us to see and do
    One roar from the lion
    My son started crying
The trip was over I was scared to



FOR ZANY ZOO CONTEST

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Travis Cotrel

May 20, 2010 at 4:22 PM

Hello Faly call me when you can!

Amy Green

May 13, 2010 at 3:35 PM

Loved it!

Jan Harvey

May 13, 2010 at 1:14 PM

"One roar from... has the imagery of the poem, while "started crying suggests maybe the door is open for all the places to discover with your son. Very nice. Thx. Jan

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 12, 2010 at 4:15 AM

Good one! Congratulations on your success in the Linda-Marie’s “Zaney Zoo” contest with this fun limerick. Your creative humor soars with amusement! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! (Even though, true for many!) Laughingly with Love, Dane Ann

Jimmy Anderson

May 10, 2010 at 10:36 AM

Hey Faleshia, Congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice Limerick...and thnx for leaving your comments on my writes...hugs, Jimmy

Daniel Cwiak

May 9, 2010 at 9:39 PM

Thanks for reminding me of those roars that I heard when I took my kids to the zoo. I was scared too! Congrats on the win! Dan C.

James Fraser

May 9, 2010 at 7:22 AM

Awe, sweet delightful Limerick Faleshia. Lions, and other big animals can be quite intimidating on young children. Congratulations in the contest >> James

Gert W. Knop

May 9, 2010 at 4:19 AM

Well written Limerick, Faleshia! And of course congrats to your win in the contest! A lion's roaring can for sure frighten children! Thank you for your comments and hope you have a nice Sunday...Gert

Margaret Foster

May 8, 2010 at 6:18 PM

good one Faleshia, I guess no more trips to the zoo for a long time. congratulations on your success in the contest....Margaret

Caryl Muzzey

May 8, 2010 at 6:15 PM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Limerick. Caryl

Doris Culverhouse

May 8, 2010 at 6:04 PM

very cute, enjoyed reading, I had an experience like that with a Jaguar, that thing screamed and my hair stood straight up, I did not like the way he looked at me.

May 8, 2010 at 5:59 PM

You have me chuckling. Congratulation on placing second in the contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

May 8, 2010 at 5:24 PM

made me laugh, Faleshia.. Good one --congrats to you!-Robert

Andrea Dietrich

May 8, 2010 at 5:18 PM

Very nice win, Faleshia. Congratulations. Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 8, 2010 at 1:33 PM

Congrats Faleshia on your 2nd place with with Abe in my ZANY ZOO contest.. with this fun poem ..bringing back memories of my four sons at the zoo... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. luv.. Linda-Marie..