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Zoo Mania

I Took my son on a trip to the zoo
There was so much for us to see and do
    One roar from the lion
    My son started crying
The trip was over I was scared to



FOR ZANY ZOO CONTEST

Copyright © Faleshia Murphy | Year Posted 2010

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Travis Cotrel Date: 5/20/2010 4:22:00 PM Hello Faly call me when you can! Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 5/13/2010 3:35:00 PM Loved it! Login to Reply

Jan Harvey Date: 5/13/2010 1:14:00 PM "One roar from... has the imagery of the poem, while "started crying suggests maybe the door is open for all the places to discover with your son. Very nice. Thx. Jan Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 5/12/2010 4:15:00 AM Good one! Congratulations on your success in the Linda-Marie’s “Zaney Zoo” contest with this fun limerick. Your creative humor soars with amusement! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! (Even though, true for many!) Laughingly with Love, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 5/10/2010 10:36:00 AM Hey Faleshia, Congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice Limerick...and thnx for leaving your comments on my writes...hugs, Jimmy Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 5/9/2010 9:39:00 PM Thanks for reminding me of those roars that I heard when I took my kids to the zoo. I was scared too! Congrats on the win! Dan C. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/9/2010 7:22:00 AM Awe, sweet delightful Limerick Faleshia. Lions, and other big animals can be quite intimidating on young children. Congratulations in the contest >> James Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 5/9/2010 4:19:00 AM Well written Limerick, Faleshia! And of course congrats to your win in the contest! A lion's roaring can for sure frighten children! Thank you for your comments and hope you have a nice Sunday...Gert Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 5/8/2010 6:18:00 PM good one Faleshia, I guess no more trips to the zoo for a long time. congratulations on your success in the contest....Margaret Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 5/8/2010 6:15:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Limerick. Caryl Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 5/8/2010 6:04:00 PM very cute, enjoyed reading, I had an experience like that with a Jaguar, that thing screamed and my hair stood straight up, I did not like the way he looked at me. Login to Reply

Date: 5/8/2010 5:59:00 PM You have me chuckling. Congratulation on placing second in the contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 5/8/2010 5:24:00 PM made me laugh, Faleshia.. Good one --congrats to you!-Robert Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/8/2010 5:18:00 PM Very nice win, Faleshia. Congratulations. Luv, andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/8/2010 1:33:00 PM Congrats Faleshia on your 2nd place with with Abe in my ZANY ZOO contest.. with this fun poem ..bringing back memories of my four sons at the zoo... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 5/8/2010 12:15:00 AM ha ha. now that is a funny story. i wouldn't blame you! this is for sure a win. excellent limerick.lolll -Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Abe Lopez Date: 5/7/2010 6:59:00 PM sometimes grreat plans come crashing down..... great write! best of luck in the contest....... Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/7/2010 3:03:00 PM LOL AT LEAST YOU ADMITTED IT, ENJOYED AND GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 5/7/2010 2:01:00 PM Cute, I enjoyed the read. A great experience to recall. Good luck in the contest. Caryl Login to Reply

Nigel Fox Date: 5/7/2010 12:59:00 PM A lions roar practised for milleniums - how can it can't fail !! Login to Reply

Larry Belt Date: 5/7/2010 10:30:00 AM Great Limerick Faleshia....Good Luck....Larry Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/7/2010 9:34:00 AM Wow! Faleshia, this is a very cool Limerick, i' d be scared to, Good luck in the contest,..p.d Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/7/2010 8:23:00 AM The zoo CAN be a scary place, Faleshia. Next time maybe you should take your son to see the sea otters or birds. Enjoyed your limerick! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply