Zompire

(Quatrains I wrote with Jack Horne. BTW, Zompire is a word invented by Jack and both of us like vampire/zombie stories!) I didn't sleep a wink last night And tossed and turned in bed; As morning came I swear I was Just like the Living Dead. In fact, when I went out the door, Into the morning sun, I cringed! My skin felt like a steak About to be well done. A zompire I'd become, you see, And now when it is day, I'm sleeping (but I never slept At night time anyway!) OUR TANKA Not able to sleep I went to the bathroom and Looked in the mirror. . . I now have no reflection The Dawn of the Living Dead Andrea Dietrich with Jack Horne, written Sept 14, 2013 For Shadow Hamilton's New Contest Team Work Poetry Contest
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Davis Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 6:47 PM
This is a creative and imaginative write. Any horror lover will enjoy this fantastic write. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Hijinx poem.
Babcock Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 6:12 PM
I do not watch those movies or I would never sleep. I tend to watch romantic or comic movies so I can sleep the night. Nice double you have penned. love phyl
Deschler Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 12:57 PM
I really enjoyed this unique poem and dark collaboration! Really great team work! Congratulations to both of you on your win!...Thank you very much for the placement of my poem in your acrostic contest! I truly appreciate it, Andrea!
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 1:56 PM
Got a chuckle with this winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
A  Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:05 AM
Andrea, nice team work.......... lovely win............SKAT
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 7:07 PM
This is so much fun, congrats to you ants Jack!
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 3:32 PM
congrats on 3rd with your quatrain in team work contest Ty for entering
Perry Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 1:52 PM
Zompire---I like it!! :)
Gregory Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 10:46 PM
So good! I like!
Horne Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 3:24 PM
lol, thanks for writing this with me, my friend - will read the comments next time
May Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:56 AM
nice collab....best wishes
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 3:24 AM
I can relate to your poem..I was a complete zompire when Christie was born..Still am sometimes..Joining your group of vamps and zombs
Johnson Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 12:03 PM
More please. The connection of the macabe and just waking up to reality is a little scary. :) Enjoyed very much. Good luck to both of you in the contest.
Ober Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Brilliant and SO fun!! You two make a fantastic team! :)
Jordan Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 7:41 AM
The Zombie Apocalypse is indeed upon us. What to do, what to do? I know... Write poems! Good luck in the contest.... jack
Seal Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Great teamwork, well done to both. I'm beginning to think I never sleep at night, it's 2.57 am here, and I'm reading your poems, does that make me a super fan? lol. Take care, Richard
Devnath  Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Wonderful collaboration. Both enjoyed a lot. Very funny poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Anish Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 1:47 PM
So - you also write dark and evil poetry. You two have a good collaboration going on. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Austin Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Wonderful spooky stuff. It is well known that vampires cannot eat sugar. It is bad for their fangs. Thanks for the correction. I forgot to look up the spelling for dog. I'm terribly dizzy lately and sometimes can't manage the computer. I see a doctor on the 23rd. Love, daver
Gasun Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Wow...an outstanding poem for the two contest this is my dear friend Andrea. I truly enjoyed reading this. Excellent collaboration indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and good luck always! love lots, Leonora
Fisher Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 7:37 AM
Two great collaborations! It defines Monday's to a T.
Neels Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 10:31 PM
Your collab has a great flow to it Andrea and Jack. Interesting title as well. Wishing you both the best for the contest with this one. Andrea I actually wrote 2 Acrostics but never entered them in the contest. The second one you read was the translation of adieu suggested by Gerald. ;)
Ferry Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Good Collab..Sure it will do well..Personally, I like my steak rare...Rick
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 7:36 PM
This was fun to read and a great collaboration Andrea and Jack! loved your made up word.
Bauer Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 6:49 PM
great job! i especially love the first poem...
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