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Robert's Zoltar Speaks Contest ~ 6/7/26

Premiere Contest WinnerZoltar Spoke to Me

I was enjoying the drive today...
the way pale blue skies mingled
with the soft amber glow of sunlight,
but needed to fill my car with gas
and stopped at a station far out of town.
I've never been superstitious,
believing in Tarot cards and Ouija Boards.
Those phony things meant to deceive,
but I had a strange feeling because
this place was giving off creepy vibes.

The weird guy I paid didn't look up
when he pushed my change at me...
six quarters and a dime.
I turned to leave but the lights went off.
The door was locked from outside
and darkness stole the light of day
except for those in an arcade machine.
I stood in shadows, trying not to be noticed
but I heard a gruff baritone voice speak,
"Come closer and I will tell your fortune.
I am Zoltar from a magical gypsy realm.
Feed me four quarters and you will know
which way the winds of your destiny blow."

I turned to look at the guy I'd paid
but he was nowhere in sight.
Fright was building inside of me
but I was mesmerized by the stare
of what seemed to be human eyes.
From Zoltar, I could not turn or look away.
The crystal ball turned to ice 
and I felt a frigid chill in my bones
I had the ominous sense that I was alone.

My body was numb but not my hand
where the coins were glowing red.
I felt the power of Zoltar in command.
and my fingers gave up control.
I pushed four quarters into the slot
then, on Zoltar's lips was an evil grin
and his head began to slowly spin.
When it stopped, my fortune card dropped
but I dared not read what it said.
He'd feasted on my quarters... four
but Zoltar, the fortune teller wanted more.

His head started spinning again...
and he was repeating the words,
"Take the card. Take the card."
Each time he spoke another card flew out.
By now many were on the floor.
I reached behind the machine
to put an end to the scary charade
but fear tangled me in its web
when I discovered it wasn't plugged in.

I crawled away, trying to catch my breath,
thinking this would be the end of me until
the lights suddenly came back on and
the arcade machine was silent and still.

A family had walked in to pay for gas
and were buying snacks for the road.
I got up from the floor and ran 
as fast as my legs would carry me.
But I could still hear that deep voice
taunting me and see that evil grin
as I quickly sped away,
second guessing my doubt in the occult.

On the dashboard in front of me
was something I hadn't seen before...
A fortune teller's card with the name Zoltar!
Lightning flashed and thunder roared
when I threw it out my car window.
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Daniel Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 9:57 PM
Wow! You scared me, Lin, great poem:) congratulations on your trophy win:)
Edmonds  Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 2:38 PM
A wonderful poem/story Lin, though scary it’s a marvellous read… Beryl
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 12:44 PM
#7 on top 100 poems list. Well deserved
Lane Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 6:38 AM
I never look at those lists. Thanks, Andrea.
Gibbons Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Well deserved win Lin a real masterpiece it had me gripped reading til the end. " I was mesmerized by his stare" you wrote ~ well I was mesmerized by every word that described the scene so real ~felt like I was there. I love your diverse creative skills <3 :)
Lane Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 6:38 AM
I’m glad my lines captured you rather than Zoltar! Thank a bunch, Dorothy. .
Pachecho Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:21 AM
Lin, I'm happy to see that your poem got the recognition it deserves. Especially when the deck is stacked against the honest poets that don't use AI. Your poem is natural, creative, an AI free. (AI cant replicate what you wrote). That can't be said about at least 1 entry in the baseball contest-which I was also disappointed that you didnt place.. For the life of me I don't know how one entry (he) gets away with using AI. Quiltbot has numerous of his entries at 100% AI. The trophy you won-congrats, is the product of hard work, talent and you being you. I'm happy to see that trophy by your name.
Lane Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, Connie. I'm grateful for your honoring thoughts. By determining which sponsors have no care as to who is entering their contests using AI, I have weeded the number of contests I'm willing to write for. Equal blame, equal shame for the entrant and the judges who host without caring if a human hand wrote for them or not.
Kitchin Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 3:20 AM
Lin, back to congratulate you on your first place win. A well deserved honor.
Lane Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:31 AM
Thanks so very much, Tania. Appreciate your congratulations.
Croft Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 3:16 PM
congrats on your win!
Lane Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:30 PM
Thanks a lot, Karen.
Liguori Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 2:49 PM
So entertaining!! Congrats on the trophy win!! Well done
Lane Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:29 PM
Hi Robert and thank you so very much for the honor of placing in your contest. It was a great theme!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 6:46 PM
Very cool and so creative. People are loving the Zoltar contest. I like fortune telling stuff. Gotta get in on this one!
Lane Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 4:26 AM
Thanks, Andrea. It’s a good opportunity to use imaginative writing.
Allison Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 2:06 PM
wow Lin you built up the story so brilliantly - an epic tale that gave me goosebumps! not a contest that interests me but I am so glad I read yours! hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 2:30 PM
Once I started it just fell into place. Thank you so very much, Jan. Sorry for the goosebumps. ;-)
Kitchin Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 11:12 AM
Lin, wow, what a scary and captivating story. I agree with Tom, Stephen King would be impressed. A fav. Best for the contest. -hugs.
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Thank you very much, Tania. My daughter read it and says it could from the pages of Twilight Zone.
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 9:27 AM
Wow, a brilliant write Lin, Stephen King would be impressed. This would make a great edge of your seat horror movie, I played it as such as I was reading it. Best of luck in the contest. A fav! for me. Tom
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 11:37 AM
Tom, I agree and that’s exactly my point. Thanks. Connie, it’s gotten to the point that ny humanizing AI, Poetrysoup can seem more human than if written with pen and ink.
Pachecho Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 10:44 AM
Lin, Quillbot has your poem at 0%. That's the one I use. I've seen some winners with a Quillbot grade 100% likely AI taking a top place.
Cunningham Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 9:54 AM
I don't think using them proves anything, we've all ran our poems through them and getting different readings. It must be very frustrating for sponsors trying to weed out the bad apples in the barrel.
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 9:43 AM
Thank you ever so much for your comments. Accolades from my fellow poets are enough of a reward for me, Tom. I wanted to enter my poem as proof that AI detectors are defective. I checked my poem with 3 different sites and the results on two of them showed it as 80%, 92% AI (litero-ai and Justdone). The 3rd site (GPTZero) showed it to be 100% human. I have never and will never post something that did not originate with me. ;-)
Pachecho Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 9:05 AM
Lin, I was on the edge of my seat reading this poem. You captured the moment. I can see the look on your face when you realized the fortune-teller machine wasn't plugged in. This is great storytelling at its best.
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 9:13 AM
Hi and thanks so very much for feeling the fearful angst in this one, Connie. I wish my storytelling ability was half as good as Mayor Tom’s. I’m grateful for your read and kind remarks!
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