Zodiac Orphan (Capricorn/Aquarius)

Balanced on a cusp precariously,
 Trying to decide who I’d rather be,
   Capricorn is sure and steady,
Aquarius, thoughtful and ever ready,
    Yet neither one is really me.





**For the Zodiac Race**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Galua Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:46 PM
this is full of wit...I love it...^_^ v
Walters Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 8:00 PM
Wonderful! Clever and fitting. Best wishes, Kris~
Sweetheart Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 10:25 PM
Very cute Sarah..good luck in P.D.'s newest contest.. enjoyed your technique tonight.. my entry is "Cool Cat Leo" for my fiance' as I got in too late for my Gemini sign.. I am on the cusp of Taurus so I understand .... good luck...
La France Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:29 PM
Well done Sarah, best of luck in the contest with this wonderful limerick~{*.*}~
Roberts Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 7:35 PM
cute one, one of my girls is a cusp baby Scorpio/saggitarius, but in her case we know which one she is, good luck in the contest
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