Zipper Lips

I'm learning to shut my mouth. Keep some secrets.
The world isn't deserving of the story I have inside. 
Levels of perception. People can never truly understand someone else.
I will always be a stranger to you, no matter how much I talk.
So I should be quieter and then you won't have my words to use against me when I've become no longer beneficial to your needs.

And it's difficult. No lie. 
When I've got so much to say and all these roaring thoughts and feelings screaming at me at the time. 
I'm interested. Why aren't you interested? Why doesn't anybody show interest in anything anymore.
It makes me crazy. 

Dull and lifeless. I'm surrounded by wooden puppet people. 
And nobody wants to read books.
Nobody wants to talk about the universe. 
Learn obscure bits of history. 
Ponder ancient times and pyramids.
Or take up knitting just for fun.
Argue whether aliens actually exist. (They do.)
Nobody wants to write poems or stories.
Draw, doodle, or paint.
Walk aimlessly through this town. 
Find a new favorite band or podcast.
Research medical history and eradicated diseases. 
Ask a challenging question. 
Work on building character. 

I miss when stuff mattered and people mattered. 
I miss the curiosity that should be omnipresent in humanity.

So, keep your reality TV and your 9 to 5 job.
Keep cleaning up the house that never gets messy.
Go on gossiping. 
Continue to be self absorbed. 
Keep on believing the evening news.
And your high school textbooks. 

I'll be a weirdo, a lot misunderstood. 
I am happy to stand out in my ways. I'm totally down to be a freak in a whitewashed, boring world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 7/25/2019 5:11:00 AM
“People can never truly understand someone else. … Why doesn't anybody show interest in anything anymore. … I'm surrounded by wooden puppet people. … I miss the curiosity that should be omnipresent in humanity. … . I'll be a weirdo, a lot misunderstood. I am happy to stand out in my ways. I'm totally down to be a freak in a whitewashed, boring world.” These words caught me, my first reading of your first poem; and what a poem Gina! Honest, incisive and relevant. Thank you for sharing.
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Gina Young
Date: 8/3/2019 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for the comment. I appreciate your feedback so much!
Date: 7/4/2019 11:26:00 AM
Keep your poetry flowing, Gina. Having read all of your poems that you've submitted to the Soup to date, I can say that you provide a dark yet refreshing perspective on life in today's world. And your poetry is a catharsis for those who have experienced similar circumstances. It certainly has been such for me. ~Mark
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Date: 8/3/2019 7:42:00 PM
Thank you! I always worry that my words won't be understood in the way I want them too but the comments I've been receiving here help me see that I am making sense... I deeply appreciate the response.
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